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Hidden tears
Contributed by
afrikawillis
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 02:19:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shes been stalked for so long
Its painful to watch
An innocent girl who is now lost
Shes been touched many times
By a man she knows
The fear inside she dares not show
A silent whisper, no one hears
A smile that hides all her fears
Shes been hurt for many years
Still no one sees her hidden tears
Im the only one
Who can see
Something lost a classic beauty
In her heart pain builds high
A silent whisper, no one hears
A smile that hides all her fears
Shes been hurt for many years
Still no one sees her hidden tears
The one whos known
The whole time
Just leaves it all behind
I had a feeling
This had happen before
I only wish I could be
With her for all eternity
A silent whisper, no one hears
A smile that hides all her fears
Shes been hurt for many years
Still no one sees her hidden tears
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2004-02-18 02:19:42]
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Re: Hidden tears
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:30:32 PM AEST
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this was so sad very good poem I liked the rhyme structure. Very well written and emotional write about something that happens far to often.
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