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Array ( [sid] => 35447 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => have a nice life [time] => 2004-02-18 18:51:47 [hometext] => the only good thing about heartbreak is all the emotions can fuel inspiration. i dont usually rhyme so i hope you like. [bodytext] => Have a nice life-
one of us should.
i will take the misery,
i offer you the good.

Leave me now-
So in peace i may begin,
the unraveling of my threads.
The beginning of my end.

To you i am a burden,
while your the essence of my being.
If only one may be happy,
Its you who deserves to be.

If only i could hate you!
I would leave the pain and flee.
But im cursed with a thing called love,
so the torment is stuck with me.

Take this as my final gift-
your free of me for eternity.
i promise to fade from existence,
Living only as bittersweet memory. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => antares [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

have a nice life

Contributed by antares on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Have a nice life-
one of us should.
i will take the misery,
i offer you the good.

Leave me now-
So in peace i may begin,
the unraveling of my threads.
The beginning of my end.

To you i am a burden,
while your the essence of my being.
If only one may be happy,
Its you who deserves to be.

If only i could hate you!
I would leave the pain and flee.
But im cursed with a thing called love,
so the torment is stuck with me.

Take this as my final gift-
your free of me for eternity.
i promise to fade from existence,
Living only as bittersweet memory.

Copyright © antares ... [ 2004-02-18 18:51:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: have a nice life (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:02:25 PM AEST
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I've been there. I am there. This was an excellent poem and I certainly can relate. Well done!! Kie

Re: have a nice life (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:26:57 PM AEST
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i think this is the best so far, but then, ive been there too aint i? this is a great poem. thankyou for sharing this, luv phil xxx

Re: have a nice life (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:23:05 PM AEST
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this poem is beautiful, i am currently breathing on the same plain of existence as yourself, hugs n' love nessa

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