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Array ( [sid] => 35582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Burn me whole / Spal mě celou [time] => 2004-02-19 19:17:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => learn to know
the curves of fire
then you can´t burn
you think, fond

and see
wind the fire stirs
and you?
Burn your wings

I might get well
You think,
Uncertainly moving
You spread the wings

You have no other choice
it´s impossible
In desert without water
you die anyway

you learn and learn again
how to act with the flame
then you realize
only amen

you will stay
and offer yourself to flame
wings were not enough
not enough pain of yourself

bur me, fire, burn,
take me whole
i gave up
no sense to fight any more

when you devour
the last piece of me
you´ll probably be fed enough
and I, dead only

you can not take my soul
i won´t give it to you
you´re not that clever
I am cleverer than you

Amongst billions stars
My soul will be fine
And today
Nor tomorrow, Yours, fire…..


Nauč se znát
Křivky ohně
Pak se nespálíš
Myslíš si bláhově

A ejhle
Vítr jej rozdmýchá
A ty?
Popálíš si křidýlka..

Nevadí, snad se uzdravím
Myslíš si,
Pohybem váhavým
Znovu letíš

Nemáš jiné volby,
Jinak to prostě nejde
V poušti bez vody
Rychle zemřeš

A tak učíš se zas a znova
Jak na ten plamen
Pak záhy zjistíš
že je s tebou amen

budeš stát
a plamenům nabídneš tělo
málo byla křídla
málo tě to bolelo

pal si mě, ohni,
vem si mě celou
vzdávám se
bojovat nemá cenu

až olízneš poslední kus
až uhasneš sám
snad nasycen budeš dost
a já, jen mrtvá….

Však duši si nevezmeš
Tu ti nedám
Tak chytrý nejseš
Chytřejší jsem já

Mezi miliardami hvězd
Bude jí dobře,
Duše moje dnes,
Ani zítra nebude tvoje

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Burn me whole Spal mě celou

Contributed by Aika on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



learn to know
the curves of fire
then you can´t burn
you think, fond

and see
wind the fire stirs
and you?
Burn your wings

I might get well
You think,
Uncertainly moving
You spread the wings

You have no other choice
it´s impossible
In desert without water
you die anyway

you learn and learn again
how to act with the flame
then you realize
only amen

you will stay
and offer yourself to flame
wings were not enough
not enough pain of yourself

bur me, fire, burn,
take me whole
i gave up
no sense to fight any more

when you devour
the last piece of me
you´ll probably be fed enough
and I, dead only

you can not take my soul
i won´t give it to you
you´re not that clever
I am cleverer than you

Amongst billions stars
My soul will be fine
And today
Nor tomorrow, Yours, fire…..


Nauč se znát
Křivky ohně
Pak se nespálíš
Myslíš si bláhově

A ejhle
Vítr jej rozdmýchá
A ty?
Popálíš si křidýlka..

Nevadí, snad se uzdravím
Myslíš si,
Pohybem váhavým
Znovu letíš

Nemáš jiné volby,
Jinak to prostě nejde
V poušti bez vody
Rychle zemřeš

A tak učíš se zas a znova
Jak na ten plamen
Pak záhy zjistíš
že je s tebou amen

budeš stát
a plamenům nabídneš tělo
málo byla křídla
málo tě to bolelo

pal si mě, ohni,
vem si mě celou
vzdávám se
bojovat nemá cenu

až olízneš poslední kus
až uhasneš sám
snad nasycen budeš dost
a já, jen mrtvá….

Však duši si nevezmeš
Tu ti nedám
Tak chytrý nejseš
Chytřejší jsem já

Mezi miliardami hvězd
Bude jí dobře,
Duše moje dnes,
Ani zítra nebude tvoje





Copyright © Aika ... [ 2004-02-19 19:17:36]
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Re: Burn me whole Spal mě celou (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:28:56 PM AEST
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A very interesting and unique poem. Great job!


Re: Burn me whole Spal mě celou (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:29:09 PM AEST
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What a great poem,Well done on this!
Christina


Re: Burn me whole Spal mě celou (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:36:46 AM AEST
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Wonderful write Aika.......you are telling them just how much of you they are allowed to take. Draw you lines in your heart, and never let them tear it apart! It's all up to you...take you stand, and when they know.....don't let them anymore go!
Very thoughtprovoking poem....very good!
love you
consue




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