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Only love, thought it true
meant to last life through.
Walking away, she cried,
Your love was a lie!
thought you'd love so good
Love would last, it should.
As she was walking away
I heard her say.

If only you hadn't strayed
my love could have stayed.
Counterfit love can't warm my heart
when lonely tear drops start.
You painted such a pretty picture
of lovely green pastures
then took me to hells flames.
There love has no domain.

Guess who showed me a thin line
between love, hate, your's, mine.
Even I know you crossed over
walked on past feilds of clover.
Took love, turned into hate
on past heaven's gate.
This ain't no life for me
I choose love, can't you see?

© Emy Star
29 Sept 2003

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WALKING AWAY

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:38:56 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Only love, thought it true
meant to last life through.
Walking away, she cried,
Your love was a lie!
thought you'd love so good
Love would last, it should.
As she was walking away
I heard her say.

If only you hadn't strayed
my love could have stayed.
Counterfit love can't warm my heart
when lonely tear drops start.
You painted such a pretty picture
of lovely green pastures
then took me to hells flames.
There love has no domain.

Guess who showed me a thin line
between love, hate, your's, mine.
Even I know you crossed over
walked on past feilds of clover.
Took love, turned into hate
on past heaven's gate.
This ain't no life for me
I choose love, can't you see?

© Emy Star
29 Sept 2003

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2004-02-20 01:38:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WALKING AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:15:43 AM AEST
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cool. this could make for a really cool angry unrequited love rock song. I especially like you 2nd stanza, really strong.

Re: WALKING AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:26:16 AM AEST
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I REALLY LIKED THAT ONE! PRETTY TOUCH
-ING!! SO WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS IT
WAS GREAT!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!

Re: WALKING AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:39:20 AM AEST
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There is immense strength in this poem amidst the anger and regret. Great poem.

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