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It lasts a while, then it is due,
It hardly stays and I'm not surprised,
I wish I trusted with just my eyes.

At first it seemed the bond was sealed,
And all my doubts and fears were healed,
But once again it falls apart,
Too bad I trusted with my heart.

The enter with grace yet easily leave,
And scatter like leaves beneath the oak tree,
The pain, it sears after infinite tries,
I should have trusted with just my eyes. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 63 [informant] => blueheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

Outcast

Contributed by blueheart on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:37:38 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

The pretence smiles they give to you,
It lasts a while, then it is due,
It hardly stays and I'm not surprised,
I wish I trusted with just my eyes.

At first it seemed the bond was sealed,
And all my doubts and fears were healed,
But once again it falls apart,
Too bad I trusted with my heart.

The enter with grace yet easily leave,
And scatter like leaves beneath the oak tree,
The pain, it sears after infinite tries,
I should have trusted with just my eyes.

Copyright © blueheart ... [ 2004-02-20 04:37:38]
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Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:55:31 AM AEST
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Very good writing. I can relate.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for your awesome comments on my work.

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:17:44 AM AEST
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Oh Blueheart what you say is so true.
For these days are filled with not love but hate.
No one can be trusted when it comes to a
trustworthy friend.....unless you've known them for a long time.
I know what you mean.....it's happened to me in with my family!
But don't give us....we here at YPDC will be
your friend......to the end!
lovingcritters
consue

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:32:45 PM AEST
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Excellent poetry!! I wish you posted more often :o)

Roses
Larry

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:54:14 AM AEST
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a very great write...i can relate to this, good job

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:41:45 AM AEST
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dearest hanna, this is so true... beautifully written, may your ink always flow, may you always have a warm smile and poem in your heart, please keep writing, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->>-

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:42:06 AM AEST
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I feel you. I can absolutely relate to this, you mapped and wrote it out brilliantly and with so much depth. I salute you.

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:05:53 PM AEST
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Yup. That's my life. Sums it up VERY beautifully! I loved your poem, it described things very well. Good job Blueheart!

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:51:23 AM AEST
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Excellent! This is very well done. I like your rhyming. Very worthy poem.
Andrew

Re: Outcast (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:03:20 AM AEST
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Sad but very powerfull!
I know the feeling well.
Your unique talent shines in this write.
luv, huggs,
emy

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