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Array ( [sid] => 35730 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Little Scitso Girl [time] => 2004-02-20 19:49:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night is silent and I lay still in my bed listening to the echo’s and shadows on my walls talk to me. I see no one around, no hero to save me or keep me from crying till the end of my days. I never thought I would have this love to be of what I can’t describe. But love I don’t believe in its just lust in disguise.

“Hi my name is Bell, can you help me find my way?”
“Hi, my name is Jill, can you help me see myself?”
“Hi my name is Amber, can you help me with my pain?”
“Hi my name is Megan, can you see me through the night?”

“Hi, I am the knight that protects people from the night.”

“Hi my name is Bell, Jill, Amber, Megan I am the scitso mind that haunts the real me Ashley.”

“What can I do for you, what is it that you need?”

“I need you to help me, see me, feel my pain, and hear my cry’s.”

“Oh dear lady what can I do, I don’t know how I can save you for I can only save the light.”

“Please kind sir, I need you to help me find my way. I need to be saved from the night that blocks my day.”

“I’m sorry for you child, for the sun should shine upon you and graze your snow white skin with the shadows of its rays.”

“Please sir help me.”

“I’m sorry child I cannot save you, for you must save yourself.”

The knight could not save me and couldn’t heal my pain, he just walked right away from me and left me all alone. What can I do now? Who will save me from my self?

“Hello, Hello.”

There’s and echo that I hear, someone will save me and take me out of here.

“Hello, Hello.” I replied

“Who’s is up there?” please describe
“Hi I am the spider, the widow who lost her husband.”

“Hi my name is Bell, can you help me find my way?”
“Hi, my name is Jill, can you help me see myself?”
“Hi my name is Amber, can you help me with my pain?”
“Hi my name is Megan, can you see me through the night?”

“Where are you young child for I cannot see your face.” the spider said to me

“I am down here in this well trapped under my life.”

Then she came down to me spinning her web all the way and when the glisten of her web pierced my darkened eyes it stung with such power of one thousand swords in battle.

“Hi my name is Bell, Jill, Amber, Megan I am the scitso mind that haunts the real me Ashley.”

“I’m sorry dear child I cannot save you from your life for I am too small to ever make a cut.”

“Please dear widow spider wont you help me save myself for just one bite from you would put me to sleep eternally.”

“No, I wont do that I will not let you sleep, No I will not save you for you must save yourself.”

Then she went back up her web and walked away with shame. What can I do now for I can’t save myself, if the knight wont help me nor the widow spider then there must be someone else.

“Hello.” a voice said from afar with such sweet song

“Hello.” I said responding hoping it would help

“Who is it that is down there for your eyes don’t glow like mine.” the voice said

“Hi my name is Bell, can you help me find my way?”
“Hi, my name is Jill, can you help me see myself?”
“Hi my name is Amber, can you help me with my pain?”
“Hi my name is Megan, can you see me through the night?”

“Hi I am the demon that hides in the light.”

“Why are you down there, alone and by yourself?”
“I am down here for salvation, so please save me from life.”

“Hi my name is Bell, Jill, Amber, Megan I am the scitso mind that haunts the real me Ashley.”

“Well dear child I must go the light is gaining on my back and soon my demon flesh will burn and I will be no more.”

“Please demon can you save me help me out of here?”

“Sorry dear child for your eyes don’t glow like mine I cannot see to whom I talk to, so now I must go. My back is burning and the light is growing.”

“No, please demon help me, save me, so one day I can see the light.”

“I wish I could dear darkened child but I cant save you, for you must save yourself.”

But the demon didn’t respond he just disappeared with a poof. I’m stuck down here in this well caught in the darkness for the knight nor the widow spider of the demon wouldn’t, couldn’t save me. So I will sit down here waiting for the light. For I fear that it isn’t coming so I will drown completely in my tears and misery, crying till I die eternally.

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The Little Scitso Girl

Contributed by AmaNdAsHepArD on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:49:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The night is silent and I lay still in my bed listening to the echo’s and shadows on my walls talk to me. I see no one around, no hero to save me or keep me from crying till the end of my days. I never thought I would have this love to be of what I can’t describe. But love I don’t believe in its just lust in disguise.

“Hi my name is Bell, can you help me find my way?”
“Hi, my name is Jill, can you help me see myself?”
“Hi my name is Amber, can you help me with my pain?”
“Hi my name is Megan, can you see me through the night?”

“Hi, I am the knight that protects people from the night.”

“Hi my name is Bell, Jill, Amber, Megan I am the scitso mind that haunts the real me Ashley.”

“What can I do for you, what is it that you need?”

“I need you to help me, see me, feel my pain, and hear my cry’s.”

“Oh dear lady what can I do, I don’t know how I can save you for I can only save the light.”

“Please kind sir, I need you to help me find my way. I need to be saved from the night that blocks my day.”

“I’m sorry for you child, for the sun should shine upon you and graze your snow white skin with the shadows of its rays.”

“Please sir help me.”

“I’m sorry child I cannot save you, for you must save yourself.”

The knight could not save me and couldn’t heal my pain, he just walked right away from me and left me all alone. What can I do now? Who will save me from my self?

“Hello, Hello.”

There’s and echo that I hear, someone will save me and take me out of here.

“Hello, Hello.” I replied

“Who’s is up there?” please describe
“Hi I am the spider, the widow who lost her husband.”

“Hi my name is Bell, can you help me find my way?”
“Hi, my name is Jill, can you help me see myself?”
“Hi my name is Amber, can you help me with my pain?”
“Hi my name is Megan, can you see me through the night?”

“Where are you young child for I cannot see your face.” the spider said to me

“I am down here in this well trapped under my life.”

Then she came down to me spinning her web all the way and when the glisten of her web pierced my darkened eyes it stung with such power of one thousand swords in battle.

“Hi my name is Bell, Jill, Amber, Megan I am the scitso mind that haunts the real me Ashley.”

“I’m sorry dear child I cannot save you from your life for I am too small to ever make a cut.”

“Please dear widow spider wont you help me save myself for just one bite from you would put me to sleep eternally.”

“No, I wont do that I will not let you sleep, No I will not save you for you must save yourself.”

Then she went back up her web and walked away with shame. What can I do now for I can’t save myself, if the knight wont help me nor the widow spider then there must be someone else.

“Hello.” a voice said from afar with such sweet song

“Hello.” I said responding hoping it would help

“Who is it that is down there for your eyes don’t glow like mine.” the voice said

“Hi my name is Bell, can you help me find my way?”
“Hi, my name is Jill, can you help me see myself?”
“Hi my name is Amber, can you help me with my pain?”
“Hi my name is Megan, can you see me through the night?”

“Hi I am the demon that hides in the light.”

“Why are you down there, alone and by yourself?”
“I am down here for salvation, so please save me from life.”

“Hi my name is Bell, Jill, Amber, Megan I am the scitso mind that haunts the real me Ashley.”

“Well dear child I must go the light is gaining on my back and soon my demon flesh will burn and I will be no more.”

“Please demon can you save me help me out of here?”

“Sorry dear child for your eyes don’t glow like mine I cannot see to whom I talk to, so now I must go. My back is burning and the light is growing.”

“No, please demon help me, save me, so one day I can see the light.”

“I wish I could dear darkened child but I cant save you, for you must save yourself.”

But the demon didn’t respond he just disappeared with a poof. I’m stuck down here in this well caught in the darkness for the knight nor the widow spider of the demon wouldn’t, couldn’t save me. So I will sit down here waiting for the light. For I fear that it isn’t coming so I will drown completely in my tears and misery, crying till I die eternally.





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