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Array ( [sid] => 35853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Promise [time] => 2004-02-22 03:59:19 [hometext] => some things that cannot go unsaid... my poem to her [bodytext] => Some days i feel like i cannot possibly go on,
some days i miss you so much that it hurts.
Every promise i make, i will keep.

Her hair has a sweat heavinly sent,
all that i am is hers.
I devote every inch of my being to her,
my soul, my thoughts, my heart...

Every breath i breathe is for her,
my heart beats for her,
my soul cries out to her
I miss her company, holding her

I bring you a rose,
a symbol of my love,
all I do is for you,
i love you

If Id searched for love,
it would be you
If Id searched for happiness,
it could only be with you
If Id searched for a reason to live,
id find that i cant live without you.

Every song I sing, every poem I write,
every though I think, every heart beat of mine,
every inch of my body, every part of my soul,
I have devoted to you, all I am,
I ask for nothing in return,
because all i need, is you.

Id write a song for you, with beautiful lyrics,
and sing it to you, I'd do anything for you.
Every promise i make, ive kept so far,
and will continue because i love you... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I Promise

Contributed by kellros on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:59:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Some days i feel like i cannot possibly go on,
some days i miss you so much that it hurts.
Every promise i make, i will keep.

Her hair has a sweat heavinly sent,
all that i am is hers.
I devote every inch of my being to her,
my soul, my thoughts, my heart...

Every breath i breathe is for her,
my heart beats for her,
my soul cries out to her
I miss her company, holding her

I bring you a rose,
a symbol of my love,
all I do is for you,
i love you

If Id searched for love,
it would be you
If Id searched for happiness,
it could only be with you
If Id searched for a reason to live,
id find that i cant live without you.

Every song I sing, every poem I write,
every though I think, every heart beat of mine,
every inch of my body, every part of my soul,
I have devoted to you, all I am,
I ask for nothing in return,
because all i need, is you.

Id write a song for you, with beautiful lyrics,
and sing it to you, I'd do anything for you.
Every promise i make, ive kept so far,
and will continue because i love you...




Copyright © kellros ... [ 2004-02-22 03:59:19]
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Re: I Promise (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:05:54 AM AEST
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you make me jealous. can't i find a guy that actually cares about me that isn't going to stalk me? lol


Re: I Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:28:37 AM AEST
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In that promise, I hope you share a mutual promise and you enjoy 2 as 1. Anything less is nothing at all. I enjoyed your poem much, thanks for sharing.


Re: I Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:00:34 AM AEST
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All comments are appreciated cos i want to know if it is any good...


Re: I Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:23:14 AM AEST
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You have done a good job of describing your feelings. Even someone who hasn't been there would begin to understand your plight.
It is a beautiful expression of your devotion.
Stitch




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