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Array ( [sid] => 36225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweeter Dreams [time] => 2004-02-25 00:49:58 [hometext] => *Begins to whistle again softly...* I think I'll start playing again. I was having fun last time... Gotta love the dots too.... [bodytext] => You feel it all over
and my fingers dancing
all over your tender flesh.
Pressed against the wall
I kiss you deep and soft.
My hands running over
your sweet warm skin.
Kissing your throat and
whispering to you gutteraly.
Slowly taking your clothes
off trailing with my mouth.
Wanting me to hurry...
To go down lower still.
Each gasp and sigh makes
me want to go even slower.
You run your hands through
my hair pulling me closer
while you excitedly push into me.
Your anticipation growing beyond
known boundaries of control.
I smile up at you and go to pull away.
Smilling back softly growling
you pull me back still hungry
yearning for more and better.
Lightly nibbling on your
neck and shoulder you try
to undress me but...
I push against you and hold
your hands off me.
I want to make you wait,
I want you to want me,
just as much as I want you.

Raven's Sin [comments] => 7 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => (Approved and edited by Mod_1) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Sweeter Dreams

Contributed by Cobalt on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:49:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You feel it all over
and my fingers dancing
all over your tender flesh.
Pressed against the wall
I kiss you deep and soft.
My hands running over
your sweet warm skin.
Kissing your throat and
whispering to you gutteraly.
Slowly taking your clothes
off trailing with my mouth.
Wanting me to hurry...
To go down lower still.
Each gasp and sigh makes
me want to go even slower.
You run your hands through
my hair pulling me closer
while you excitedly push into me.
Your anticipation growing beyond
known boundaries of control.
I smile up at you and go to pull away.
Smilling back softly growling
you pull me back still hungry
yearning for more and better.
Lightly nibbling on your
neck and shoulder you try
to undress me but...
I push against you and hold
your hands off me.
I want to make you wait,
I want you to want me,
just as much as I want you.

Raven's Sin

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-02-25 00:49:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:01:45 AM AEST
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Wow Jeff..whenever you start to whistle..I get nervous!! And with good reason.... On this note.....I shall go to bed....and whistle myself... *wink*
Hugs
Jenni
P/S...did I say Great write!!!

Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:06:32 AM AEST
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I'm feeling deja vu.... I KNOW I already commented on this... so ummm.... where did it go?? lol awesome write Jeff....(the second time around) geez, you really want us girls to want you don't you? lmao :P

Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:11:42 AM AEST
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"Your anticipation growing beyond
known boundaries of control.
I smile up at you and go to pull away.
Smilling back softly growling"..
Ooh..proceed on boy..it is sweetly beautiful. venkat

Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by misheleluv on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:20:04 AM AEST
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Experience can be such a marvelous thing!
Anticipation may leave some trembling!
Passion...like the contact of two chemical substances...The reaction NAPALM!!!

This is the stuff dreams are made of!

michelle

Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:01:48 PM AEST
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One of these is all I can take.

*Smiles*

Words fail me......Kie

Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:02:39 PM AEST
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wow... um i dont know what else to say lol.. this is fantastic..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Sweeter Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:24:39 PM AEST
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sounded like when i began to read your poems today that you were sad... then as i read on you had this nice romance going and i suppose the first poem i read she walked away from you... so sad.. good poems.. sandy

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