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I would not hear
the words you said
were so unclear

YOU touched my arm
I swished you away
for I did not want
to look your way

YOU saved my life
when i wanted to die
you forgave my sins
and every lie

YOU reached for me again
still i would not see
all the blessings you had
waiting for me

I called your name
and you were there
so many truths you were
waiting to share

Michelle Todd [comments] => 5 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 19 [informant] => putteragain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

waiting

Contributed by putteragain on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:28:29 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

YOU called my name
I would not hear
the words you said
were so unclear

YOU touched my arm
I swished you away
for I did not want
to look your way

YOU saved my life
when i wanted to die
you forgave my sins
and every lie

YOU reached for me again
still i would not see
all the blessings you had
waiting for me

I called your name
and you were there
so many truths you were
waiting to share

Michelle Todd

Copyright © putteragain ... [ 2004-02-25 17:28:29]
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Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:32:43 PM AEST
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After reading this, I have to say, this is probably one of the only truly inspirational poems I've ever read!
Keep up the great work!

Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:03:33 PM AEST
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It was good ... i just didnt feel it... keep up the good work though... there is always room for improvment!!

Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:49:19 PM AEST
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inspiring write
michelle

Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:31:31 PM AEST
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this is lovely michelle, like holding your breath waiting..... love your style and flow in this poem too:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: waiting (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:10:16 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL POEM. I COULDN'T HAVE DONE IT ANY BETTER. IT'S PERFECT.

GOD BLESS
GWENDOLYN

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