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Array ( [sid] => 36482 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ...No More Blood... [time] => 2004-02-26 18:57:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => For once i wish that everything in your day will go okay
because i know that when your hurt
it ends up with me in all the pain

i know you suffer,
and i do to
but why must it be me that you bleed your pain through

when your hurt I'm hurt
but 10 times worse

do you hurt me so bad because you know the 1st thing i do it run for the knife,
you know the one used daily
hidden blood covered under my bed
because of you

well tonight its gone to far
I've been bleeding to much of your pain
and now that theres no more blood inside of me for you to take
I'm going to be the happiest person in the world

because guess what
that means no more pain for me

but I'm dying here tonight
and I'm forcing you to see
as you watch my face run pale
and you fall to your knees

but thank god theres no more bleeding
well at least not through me
you've drove me, your own sister
to my grave

and now...it's your turn to hurt for me [comments] => 5 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 36 [informant] => echomywurdz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

...No More Blood...

Contributed by echomywurdz on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

For once i wish that everything in your day will go okay
because i know that when your hurt
it ends up with me in all the pain

i know you suffer,
and i do to
but why must it be me that you bleed your pain through

when your hurt I'm hurt
but 10 times worse

do you hurt me so bad because you know the 1st thing i do it run for the knife,
you know the one used daily
hidden blood covered under my bed
because of you

well tonight its gone to far
I've been bleeding to much of your pain
and now that theres no more blood inside of me for you to take
I'm going to be the happiest person in the world

because guess what
that means no more pain for me

but I'm dying here tonight
and I'm forcing you to see
as you watch my face run pale
and you fall to your knees

but thank god theres no more bleeding
well at least not through me
you've drove me, your own sister
to my grave

and now...it's your turn to hurt for me

Copyright © echomywurdz ... [ 2004-02-26 18:57:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ...No More Blood... (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:01:59 PM AEST
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Oi vey, twisted stuff... but a good write nonetheless! Knives, knives, oi...
~Remy~

Re: ...No More Blood... (User Rating: 1 )
by Falconrath on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:15:25 PM AEST
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Wow...Excellent emotion and wonderful power.
Moving and enlightening at the same time.

Re: ...No More Blood... (User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:58:41 PM AEST
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as i read this i tried to guess your relation
but i was guessing a close friend, it just struck me a being aquard, but none the less a very good right.

Re: ...No More Blood... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:43:13 PM AEST
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wow this was awesome very deep... yet simple at the same time. I loved it and I have been there many times before
I've been bleeding to much of your pain
I loved that line... once again a good write.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: ...No More Blood... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:18:26 AM AEST
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Oh, please say this isn't about you! Don't do it! Don't do it! Sorry. I'm a little overexcited. This poem was awesome. I, too, was trying to guess the relation. I was thinking an abusive lover, but whatever. Keep up the awesome work.

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