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Array ( [sid] => 36532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => leave me alone [time] => 2004-02-27 02:03:35 [hometext] => i really dont care if anyone likes this or not. [bodytext] => why do you mock me
and try to ***** me off
cant you see its not funny
you must have a sick mind
or when you get mad
and just freak out
and hit me and beat
until im numb on the ground
you are disgusting
you make me so sick
and i cant even say
whats on my mind
i cant even tell you
what im thinking
because of what you say
how you judge
*****, are you blind?
are you stupid and deaf
cant you see that your jokes
are bringing me down
never expected i'd have to
put up with that
from my family
so many things
are making me fall
beatings
lies
harmless 'jokes'
and you tell me to lighten up
***** off. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 6 [informant] => crimsondream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

leave me alone

Contributed by crimsondream on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:03:35 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

why do you mock me
and try to ***** me off
cant you see its not funny
you must have a sick mind
or when you get mad
and just freak out
and hit me and beat
until im numb on the ground
you are disgusting
you make me so sick
and i cant even say
whats on my mind
i cant even tell you
what im thinking
because of what you say
how you judge
*****, are you blind?
are you stupid and deaf
cant you see that your jokes
are bringing me down
never expected i'd have to
put up with that
from my family
so many things
are making me fall
beatings
lies
harmless 'jokes'
and you tell me to lighten up
***** off.

Copyright © crimsondream ... [ 2004-02-27 02:03:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: leave me alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:16:56 AM AEST
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Well it's written really well and I can feel the anger.
It's very sad that u have to live like this.
God job.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: leave me alone (User Rating: 1 )
by bear14 on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:16:52 PM AEST
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I think ur poem is very powerful and i hope that things get better for you

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