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Trying Times
Contributed by
crimsondream
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:15:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the dreams i had
the wishes i made
once were alive
but now are laid
inside a tomb
under the ground
they're forever gone
never to be found
i had high hopes
i thought that i could
make them come true
but they never would
for awhile they flew
above the sky
with the birds
up so high
but down they fell
down so fast
back to reality
i came with a crash
so now im here
in the shadows i sit
alone and rejected
my face isnt lit
here in the darkness
im broken and torn
my hearts filled with anguish
so lonely and worn
i pray to my lord
for my soul to keep
although im a failure
please do not weep
i'll do better next time
i'll try hard to
maybe in heaven
if only i'd knew
please, hear my cries
in this alley, alone
take my life
in pain, i moan
im sorry i failed
and let everyone down
i really did try
to fit into the gown
im so sorry that i
never reached expectations
but deep in my heart
i had good intentions
didnt want to cause pain
never meant to hurt anyone
but soon it'll be over
just hand me the gun
is this the right thing?
will anyone care?
my finger pulls the trigger
blindly i stare
now its all finished
my lifes been a dud
but now i see the light
as i lie in my blood
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crimsondream
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2004-02-27 02:15:16]
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Re: Trying Times
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:41:26 AM AEST
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Don't ever think no one cares! Every single person who has ever committed suicide left grieving people who cared behind. We all care for each other, really, we just don't always show it. But here's a hug, if you need it.
Take care.
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