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Array ( [sid] => 36716 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => undesired endings [time] => 2004-02-28 21:01:47 [hometext] => man oh man.. pretty much this is about shea. *i miss you* but i never said that.. anyways, this is pretty much my first time writing song lyrics. so thats why its a little..neh. enjoy! i sure didnt. [bodytext] => im crying out, please, someone help me
theres nothing left for me to be now
i cant believe the way its going
you tell me then you take it all away now
cant stand in this spotlight
where i feel like nothings going right
you cant tell me to try to stay calm
and that its all imagination

so heres my wish
i want you to stay
and pretend that this will go away
or maybe we can try
and sort it all out now
im hopin and praying for you now

oh these dreams of wonder
tell me that theres something better
waiting up the road ahead there
but i'd have to leave you all behind now

so heres my wish
i want you to stay
and pretend that this will go away
or maybe we can try
and sort it all out now
but im doubting that we know just how

so heres my wish
please let me go away
and hope these memories will fade
i'll go on alone
dont need your problems now
and im thinking that i know just how [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 34 [informant] => crimsondream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
undesired endings

Contributed by crimsondream on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



im crying out, please, someone help me
theres nothing left for me to be now
i cant believe the way its going
you tell me then you take it all away now
cant stand in this spotlight
where i feel like nothings going right
you cant tell me to try to stay calm
and that its all imagination

so heres my wish
i want you to stay
and pretend that this will go away
or maybe we can try
and sort it all out now
im hopin and praying for you now

oh these dreams of wonder
tell me that theres something better
waiting up the road ahead there
but i'd have to leave you all behind now

so heres my wish
i want you to stay
and pretend that this will go away
or maybe we can try
and sort it all out now
but im doubting that we know just how

so heres my wish
please let me go away
and hope these memories will fade
i'll go on alone
dont need your problems now
and im thinking that i know just how




Copyright © crimsondream ... [ 2004-02-28 21:01:47]
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Re: undesired endings (User Rating: 1 )
by jbrow on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:29:01 PM AEST
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I like it good write.
p's
Gene


Re: undesired endings (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:57:38 PM AEST
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I like it.. it shows the confusion of a stressful situation well


Re: undesired endings (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:57:52 PM AEST
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This is really good! Would love to hear it to music!




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