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Array ( [sid] => 36741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mazda Confessional [time] => 2004-02-29 01:50:41 [hometext] => In my little mazda is where I spend most of my time thinking--that's where the title comes in...to you dear friend :) [bodytext] => Can you believe he didn't notice me today
As I slam the cherry car door in disarray
From mine his feelings are so diverse
As I move my stickshift into first

I can't stand work,it's become a struggle
As I carelessly press the light gas pedal
She ended our friendship right then and there
As I roll my window down for some air

And school seems tedious did you know
As I turn on the the little car radio
I admit prospects with my beloved are bleak
As a sad love song blares it's way on the chart this week

Streetlights glow on the moonlit dashboard
As I sing my lungs out to every chord
The red light brings curious gazers upon I
As I tattle my emotions available to the eye

Tomorrow my car will be an euphoric oasis
Blissful content will be heard ever so joyous
And that's why it's named Mazda confessional
Because it always listens and never labels

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Mazda Confessional

Contributed by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:50:41 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Can you believe he didn't notice me today
As I slam the cherry car door in disarray
From mine his feelings are so diverse
As I move my stickshift into first

I can't stand work,it's become a struggle
As I carelessly press the light gas pedal
She ended our friendship right then and there
As I roll my window down for some air

And school seems tedious did you know
As I turn on the the little car radio
I admit prospects with my beloved are bleak
As a sad love song blares it's way on the chart this week

Streetlights glow on the moonlit dashboard
As I sing my lungs out to every chord
The red light brings curious gazers upon I
As I tattle my emotions available to the eye

Tomorrow my car will be an euphoric oasis
Blissful content will be heard ever so joyous
And that's why it's named Mazda confessional
Because it always listens and never labels





Copyright © PumpkinPie ... [ 2004-02-29 01:50:41]
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Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:00:30 AM AEST
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Cute-n-very creative!
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:05:31 AM AEST
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NICE POEM,EVERYBODY NEEDS SOME TIME TO THEM SELVES! SO,I AGREE WITH YOUR THOUGHTS!!
DAN!!!


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 03:07:42 AM AEST
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very unique and cute, im currently a bit at odds with mine, the radio doesnt work, and the heat quit and on and on, but i still like it, and so do the dogs:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:24:09 AM AEST
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Fun, fresh, and downright delightful!
I truly enjoyed this Cindy :o)

Roses
Larry


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:02:53 PM AEST
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Goodness, I can related completely! I always spend my car time in converse with the Lord---lamenting all the shortfalls in my life. I've even owned 2 Mazdas---one red and one blue. Loved them both. This is great!
Stitch


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:23:33 AM AEST
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a very well written poem, full of all the right stuff...R&R.
my car is called the cone of silence.

tt


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:56:38 AM AEST
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hi..its a cute and delightful poem..nice read. venkat


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:31:50 AM AEST
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Great little Mazda eh! Good read..
Cheers Robert


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:48:53 PM AEST
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Thats a great idea , to ponder in your car.
I wish I had my very own car, I'd stay in there and never come out.
A delightful piece of poetry. :)


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 04:54:12 PM AEST
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This poem has a glittering style about it. Your poems are so good because they are always so unalike from one to the next- that’s very hard to achieve but your opening line set the pace nicely ‘Can you believe he didn't notice me today’.

The title instantly reminded me of one my favourite bands dashboard confessional which drew me in. ;)

Your poem also illustrates the importance of the car – it really does become like an extra room in the house. A place where you can be alone to think or just feel lonely in. I feel like I can relate to this poem.. Rod


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:52:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful.

Spazzo


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:50:24 PM AEST
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This was great. I drive a Mazda too, when I drive, which isn't often. Funny how we can remember places and times and feelings from music on the car radio. This was most imaginative. Cheers!


Re: Mazda Confessional (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 12:16:34 AM AEST
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I really really enjoyed reading this. Full of creative flare and imagery. Absolutely a wonderful write.

:)




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