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Array ( [sid] => 36765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Night ,Low light [time] => 2004-02-29 10:35:16 [hometext] => Not sure if this falls into the category to qualify for this site! [bodytext] => She stood before me
The lights were turned down low
I moved in closer
And she could see my naked body glow

Her most feminine beauty
Shining from head to toe
I reached out to touch her
And very softly she said no

She said I hardly know you
But please come closer to me
Let me feel the warmth of your body
And then we will see

I took another step forward
Her body brushed against mine
She touched me with her hand
Sending shivers down my spine

Closing my eyes
Feeling the touch of her fingers
Now through my body
Every shiver lingers.

I felt her breath
As she put her face close to mine
She whispered in my ear
Let’s have a glass of wine

I opened my eyes
With the feeling of her control
She led me by the hand
To drink some wine under lights turned down low

We sat on the sofa
And sipped on a glass of wine
Turning up the light a little
To see our bodies shine

After drinking a little
And being able to see our bodies glisten
I said softly to her
Look baby listen

We have not known each other
For so very long
But I have to tell you
You’re so sexy in that black laced thong

It was then
When I put my hands upon her thighs
She gave me the most relaxing look
Directly into my eyes

She pulled herself closer
And made her lips touch mine
I am thankful to be relaxed
From the effects of the wine

There was heated passion
In this room on this night
We both made love
That was out of sight

We are now very good friends
And this is often hard to do
Especially after such a beautiful woman
Has made love to you.

I could have made this poem so steamy
It would have made you shiver too
But why make it sleazy
By writing about some sexual goo.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Waynster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
One Night ,Low light

Contributed by Waynster on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:35:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



She stood before me
The lights were turned down low
I moved in closer
And she could see my naked body glow

Her most feminine beauty
Shining from head to toe
I reached out to touch her
And very softly she said no

She said I hardly know you
But please come closer to me
Let me feel the warmth of your body
And then we will see

I took another step forward
Her body brushed against mine
She touched me with her hand
Sending shivers down my spine

Closing my eyes
Feeling the touch of her fingers
Now through my body
Every shiver lingers.

I felt her breath
As she put her face close to mine
She whispered in my ear
Let’s have a glass of wine

I opened my eyes
With the feeling of her control
She led me by the hand
To drink some wine under lights turned down low

We sat on the sofa
And sipped on a glass of wine
Turning up the light a little
To see our bodies shine

After drinking a little
And being able to see our bodies glisten
I said softly to her
Look baby listen

We have not known each other
For so very long
But I have to tell you
You’re so sexy in that black laced thong

It was then
When I put my hands upon her thighs
She gave me the most relaxing look
Directly into my eyes

She pulled herself closer
And made her lips touch mine
I am thankful to be relaxed
From the effects of the wine

There was heated passion
In this room on this night
We both made love
That was out of sight

We are now very good friends
And this is often hard to do
Especially after such a beautiful woman
Has made love to you.

I could have made this poem so steamy
It would have made you shiver too
But why make it sleazy
By writing about some sexual goo.





Copyright © Waynster ... [ 2004-02-29 10:35:16]
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Re: One Night ,Low light (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:09:40 AM AEST
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i love this poem i truly love it...this is the kind of writting i wish i could do, and hope to do...this is beautiful and tasteful...you should help me some time...great job


Re: One Night ,Low light (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:56:06 PM AEST
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Great job, Wayne!! I knew you were great writer! never stop writing:-) you are wonderful.. love, aika:-)


Re: One Night ,Low light (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:36:27 PM AEST
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Wow! This was a poem that just took my breath away. I can't wait to read more by you. Awesome. Kie




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