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Array ( [sid] => 36853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scared Little Girl [time] => 2004-02-29 23:41:45 [hometext] => Eventually everyone has to confront what they are on the inside. Tell me what you think. [bodytext] => My mind is clouded over
And I just can't see
Searching through my thoughts
Trying to make sense of what is me
I know I'm not right
I know there's something wrong
I shouldn't feel this way
I just want to belong
There's a piece of me missing
Something is broken
I'm not sure anymore
What words need to be spoken
I'm just a scared little girl
Without a clue
There's nothing to guide my path
I don't know what to do
The only thing I feel
Is lonliness and pain
It shreds what's left of my soul
Tearing away happiness I wish to gain
One thing I know for sure in this world
Is betrayal and lies
I'm just a scared little girl
Behind cold, dead eyes
I know there's love
People that care
But I hide from them
Running in despair
If they make me love
Break through my wall
The pain would rush in
Make me stumble and fall
A scared little girl
Running from the hurt
Though needing it desperately
I run from comfort

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Scared Little Girl

Contributed by JadedExistence on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



My mind is clouded over
And I just can't see
Searching through my thoughts
Trying to make sense of what is me
I know I'm not right
I know there's something wrong
I shouldn't feel this way
I just want to belong
There's a piece of me missing
Something is broken
I'm not sure anymore
What words need to be spoken
I'm just a scared little girl
Without a clue
There's nothing to guide my path
I don't know what to do
The only thing I feel
Is lonliness and pain
It shreds what's left of my soul
Tearing away happiness I wish to gain
One thing I know for sure in this world
Is betrayal and lies
I'm just a scared little girl
Behind cold, dead eyes
I know there's love
People that care
But I hide from them
Running in despair
If they make me love
Break through my wall
The pain would rush in
Make me stumble and fall
A scared little girl
Running from the hurt
Though needing it desperately
I run from comfort





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Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:38:07 AM AEST
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This is really good! So true!


Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:04:16 AM AEST
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I THINK THAT TAKES ALOT OF COURAGE TO THINK OF YOURSELF IN THAT WAY! IF YOU HAVE FAULTS,AT LEAST YOU CAN SEE THEM!! TO ME,THAT TAKES A BIG GIRL TO DO THAT!!! VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!!
DAN!!!!!


Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:34:40 AM AEST
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A great write!! This one reminds me a a friend of mine... keeps all the hurt inside... not wanting to talk about it.


Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:54:39 AM AEST
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i think this poems is really nice, i love poems that hve feeling...and this is one....slr


Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by mrrobert on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:00:08 AM AEST
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I thought that thiis poem really brought to the surface feelings of a scared defenseless child in a grown ups body...............Really good work


Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 03:40:36 PM AEST
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Such a painful read. To know one needs help, but are unable to open up and accept it because of hurt and pain others have inflicted...

Trust is such a hard thing when one knows more pain comes with trust, and one already hurts too much.

Very well written poem--This poem gets under my skin.


Re: Scared Little Girl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:15:53 AM AEST
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i think all of your poetry is amazing and beutiful i especially love the dark and suicide poetry mostly cause thats what i'm drawn too but keep it up great job...............
**vamp**




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