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Array ( [sid] => 36914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hope you're there [time] => 2004-03-01 12:22:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => her words fall to the floor
as quickly as her tears
an almost inaudible whisper
that is so difficult to hear
i've been living with this pain
too long to remember that she's always there
(i hope you're there to understand )
that i have been lost in myself
to realize just how much she cares
her voice breaks through the silence, once more
"i love you"
she screams but it might as well be a whisper
i'm too far gone to ever hear her
i slip away quietly but will always have this memory of her to hold onto
i'm cold now but there's nothing she can do
we were searching so long for each other
she had found me but i could never quite see her
now here i turn stone white
she says to save my breathe for another day
but it was spent with my own reply:
"i love you too" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 25 [informant] => fallensilence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

hope you're there

Contributed by fallensilence on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:22:24 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

her words fall to the floor
as quickly as her tears
an almost inaudible whisper
that is so difficult to hear
i've been living with this pain
too long to remember that she's always there
(i hope you're there to understand )
that i have been lost in myself
to realize just how much she cares
her voice breaks through the silence, once more
"i love you"
she screams but it might as well be a whisper
i'm too far gone to ever hear her
i slip away quietly but will always have this memory of her to hold onto
i'm cold now but there's nothing she can do
we were searching so long for each other
she had found me but i could never quite see her
now here i turn stone white
she says to save my breathe for another day
but it was spent with my own reply:
"i love you too"

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2004-03-01 12:22:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: hope you're there (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:32:36 PM AEST
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really good write. i enjoyed it. keep it up.
Arden

Re: hope you're there (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:51:19 PM AEST
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this made me cry....it's beautiful

Re: hope you're there (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
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wow that was so sweet... so beautiful... you are really talented fallen. i really enjoy reading your poetry. thank you for sharing.

Lindsey

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