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what I'm trying to be.

The only thing I really want,
Is those things that I cant.

To sleep, to never be awake,
people can't see that I'm fake.

The mask that I show,
It will only grow.

The solitude is killing me,
Can't you see?

The tears I've cried,
God knows I tried.

The ice is made to be broken,
but I'm left here alone to be choken.

I can't take this burden no more,
It's killing me, this huge sore.

I would take your breath
cause I am the angel of death.

In the shadows I walk,
together we angels talk.

On black wings we fly,
but the secret is, the angels do cry.

I am so exhausted you know,
the biggest question is how!

I need strength to move on,
Feels like the bad angels won.

Why can't i feel the cold breeze?
Why am I left all alone to freeze?

I just want to be set free,
and make people again believing in me.

Nobody can tell you where,
but I can tell you that,
The angel of death was here.
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The angel of death

Contributed by gothicangel on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Nobody sees me,
what I'm trying to be.

The only thing I really want,
Is those things that I cant.

To sleep, to never be awake,
people can't see that I'm fake.

The mask that I show,
It will only grow.

The solitude is killing me,
Can't you see?

The tears I've cried,
God knows I tried.

The ice is made to be broken,
but I'm left here alone to be choken.

I can't take this burden no more,
It's killing me, this huge sore.

I would take your breath
cause I am the angel of death.

In the shadows I walk,
together we angels talk.

On black wings we fly,
but the secret is, the angels do cry.

I am so exhausted you know,
the biggest question is how!

I need strength to move on,
Feels like the bad angels won.

Why can't i feel the cold breeze?
Why am I left all alone to freeze?

I just want to be set free,
and make people again believing in me.

Nobody can tell you where,
but I can tell you that,
The angel of death was here.




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Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:41:35 PM AEST
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well written expression, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:35:01 PM AEST
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this is so sad I hope thoings go better for you soon.Welcome to tpdc
michelle


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:17:25 PM AEST
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really really good, i love your work i really like how it all flows. awesome talent keep it up
Arden


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by SirensLight on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:18:47 PM AEST
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Very nice intresting peice, the thing to always rememer though is that each mask is really a part of us.. there maybe only one that is truly us..but each one represents a peice of us, our souls. Eventually someone will be able to see through all the masks to believe in what you are.


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:43:51 PM AEST
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Awwww....... I can really connect with this poem, because sometimes I felt like that as well, but oh well, we will get over it..... I really like this lines though,
'On black wings we fly,
but the secret is, the angels do cry'
mmmmmmmm........................


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST
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thank you all for enjoying my poems.. this poem I like best of them all, because this is the poem I think is the deepest.. and its the poem I see myself in.. So, this is my favorite


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:18:40 AM AEST
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You have some pain in you ... holding on to your feelings in some way. YOU start over today. and if it dont work out .. you get up and start over again. YOU TRY.. that is all we can do is TRY. others have problems that they need to work out. You are a nice person through your poetry with a good heart. desiring to love and be loved. desiring to reach your goals and afraid to do so... cause you dont want to hurt anyone... May the Lord bless and keep you in his care. he will always be there. sandy


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:19:40 PM AEST
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On black wings we fly,
but the secret is, the angels do cry
My favorite line... awesome. I loved it.
Take care. Don't let your problems overwhelm you. You're stronger than they.
David




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