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Developed upon each whisper and rhyme
Caressing each flower, pregnant with fear
Suppressing each sound, void of ones ear

Broken minds crumble, like walls of my heart
Spoken through pictures, your end is my start
Season come past, each one a new feeling
Reasons persist, for the lack of my healing

Obsessing takes over, rising in fire
Repressing each flame, lost to desire
Bribing my feelings, my weapon is age
Scribing each word, emotions on page

Sleeping they lie, my slumber is long
Weeping like rain, lay dormant my song
Her essence had vanished, nothing more but to hide
The day that she left, is the day that I died

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Song of the Broken Hearted

Contributed by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Enveloped within, this cascade of time
Developed upon each whisper and rhyme
Caressing each flower, pregnant with fear
Suppressing each sound, void of ones ear

Broken minds crumble, like walls of my heart
Spoken through pictures, your end is my start
Season come past, each one a new feeling
Reasons persist, for the lack of my healing

Obsessing takes over, rising in fire
Repressing each flame, lost to desire
Bribing my feelings, my weapon is age
Scribing each word, emotions on page

Sleeping they lie, my slumber is long
Weeping like rain, lay dormant my song
Her essence had vanished, nothing more but to hide
The day that she left, is the day that I died

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-03-02 17:28:08]
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:38:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful expression of love, and a heartbreaking lament

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:46:29 PM AEST
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Geez, pull the still-beating heart from my chest and throw it against the wall! Melancholy work, great expression of your feelings. Luke, how do you do it?

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:09:28 PM AEST
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Bittersweet, yet beautifully written ... Jan

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:35:31 PM AEST
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wow and just to think u wrote that at interact! ur talent seems endless luke, you really do seem to get the reader into an intense understanding in all of your poems, but this is truely great.
love ya T xxx

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:12:57 PM AEST
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oooo! luke! excellent poem, written with style, grace and a powerful ending! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->-

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:45:55 PM AEST
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Really sad, it tugged on my heartstrings.

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:53:48 PM AEST
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beautifully written. i love this. great job keep it up.
Ardeb

Re: Song of the Broken Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:10:47 AM AEST
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dude,...awesome...nuff said. lol really great poem, love the simple rhyme scheme, worsk so well, so much emotion once again.

keep on fighting
never stop writing

John

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