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Array ( [sid] => 37165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Anger [time] => 2004-03-03 09:06:04 [hometext] => This poem I wrote the day I broke up with my x.. I was kinda angry! Please give me comments on my poems.. Tell me what I can do better and what you like.. Read my others poem as well! tnx [bodytext] => I saw your face dear,
God, I am so glad you are not here.

Every little thing that you do,
makes me really want to hate you.

You say that I will not dare,
I really do not care.

Telling all those lies,
even though people will die.

Angels are flying on silky golden wings,
keep telling me all those terrible things.

I keep on with my pray,
that you will not stay.

My depression raises,
and that really amazes.

Even though we are far apart,
you have to know,
there is no more room for you in my heart

Astrid Elise Grov [comments] => 4 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 6 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Anger

Contributed by gothicangel on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:06:04 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I saw your face dear,
God, I am so glad you are not here.

Every little thing that you do,
makes me really want to hate you.

You say that I will not dare,
I really do not care.

Telling all those lies,
even though people will die.

Angels are flying on silky golden wings,
keep telling me all those terrible things.

I keep on with my pray,
that you will not stay.

My depression raises,
and that really amazes.

Even though we are far apart,
you have to know,
there is no more room for you in my heart

Astrid Elise Grov

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-03-03 09:06:04]
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Re: Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:08:44 AM AEST
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Im sorry that this person hurt you and you had to go through this. see and feel your pain. sorry .. here is a hug.. your a great poet.. sandy

Re: Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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Yes a very good write. May I suggest you keepv the meter closer together. Keep them coming, see my latest. bye Wes...

Re: Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:31:23 AM AEST
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i love this poem.. but its sad.. great write ill be looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Arden

Re: Anger (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poetry2404 on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:09:10 PM AEST
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wow that was really good. i like the way you wrote it. i know how you feel too. keep writing.
~*~In The End Comes A Tear~*~
darkpoetry

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