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Array ( [sid] => 37193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOU FLIPPED [time] => 2004-03-03 15:44:04 [hometext] => THIS IS ABOUT REALIZING THAT YOU DONT KNOW SOMEONE AS GOOD AS YOU THINK YOU DO..WE ALL HAVE A GOOD SIDE AND SOMETIMES A HIDEN SIDE..ITS ABOUT SEEING THAT SIDE OF SOMEONE THAT I HAD NOT SEEN AND MY REACTION TO IT [bodytext] => i remember the night i saw the other side of you,
the side i had heard of but didn't believe was true.
you picked me up on this particular night,
i had no idea that your weren't all right.
you fixed me a drink and began to shout,
i didn't know what he heck you were talking about.
shouting about pictures you had taken out and placed on the table,
you were completely unstable
i took the opportunity to jet when you went and got another drink,
i ended up on the porch trying to think.
3 0'clock in the morning with no where to go no ride in sight,
i was stuck with a mad man for the night.
you came outside obviously calmed down abit,
apologizing for all the ********.
at this point i didn't know what to think,
you shined yo boots while i had a drink.
wondering what was next i had to wait and see,
now you were ready to make love to me.
i was glad looking for something to break the tension,
about the fact that you had flipped to another dimension
you chose that night to undress me then look in my eyes,
and say baby i really do apologize.
i leaned down and kissed you and said its OK,
lets just chalk it up to a crazy day.
that night you were so romantic and attentive i didn't know what to say,
the lovin we shared was different in away.
it was intense because of what we had been through,
and i was enjoying every inch of you.
still feeling the after effect of lovin i feel asleep for the night,
and went home at morning light.

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YOU FLIPPED

Contributed by desire on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:44:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



i remember the night i saw the other side of you,
the side i had heard of but didn't believe was true.
you picked me up on this particular night,
i had no idea that your weren't all right.
you fixed me a drink and began to shout,
i didn't know what he heck you were talking about.
shouting about pictures you had taken out and placed on the table,
you were completely unstable
i took the opportunity to jet when you went and got another drink,
i ended up on the porch trying to think.
3 0'clock in the morning with no where to go no ride in sight,
i was stuck with a mad man for the night.
you came outside obviously calmed down abit,
apologizing for all the ********.
at this point i didn't know what to think,
you shined yo boots while i had a drink.
wondering what was next i had to wait and see,
now you were ready to make love to me.
i was glad looking for something to break the tension,
about the fact that you had flipped to another dimension
you chose that night to undress me then look in my eyes,
and say baby i really do apologize.
i leaned down and kissed you and said its OK,
lets just chalk it up to a crazy day.
that night you were so romantic and attentive i didn't know what to say,
the lovin we shared was different in away.
it was intense because of what we had been through,
and i was enjoying every inch of you.
still feeling the after effect of lovin i feel asleep for the night,
and went home at morning light.





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Re: YOU FLIPPED (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:24:17 AM AEST
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Interesting.
Great job!
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for all your comments on my work as they r deeply appreciated.


Re: YOU FLIPPED (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:06:34 AM AEST
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I want to say this first to u desire, u have a wonderful fan in Emy.. she brought me to this site and can always be of help in both poems and song-lyrics.. I got most of my tips from her and she's been very helpful on here.. she encourages me all the time and will sure do same for you.. She is someone u can reach for help anytime... people like emy are in love with helping out on here... I am happy you are her fan and she your fan.. the both of you are my fans too.. and I your fans..Please keep posting Desire




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