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Going unnoticed
Contributed by
jc_92024
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take a look in my eyes
Do I seem like a nobody
Read my yelling lips and tell me
Do I speak like a somebody
My life is full of pain and suet
From the ashes of a burning soul
My body aches from anger
From the things I dont know
I just need someone to hold
A person who has a heart
Thats not black and bruised
From a life thats ripping away
Im reaching from this dark room
Towards the light of my escape
Please tell me I dont need help
Even though my life has been raped
My veins are full of blood
That flows in a stream of bones
Which turn my eyes to notice
That the reflection in the mirror no one knows
Clean my bleeding wounds
With salt mixed liquor
Rub my blood on my soul
And let them dry together
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jc_92024
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2004-03-04 14:17:01]
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Re: Going unnoticed
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:28:58 PM AEST
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| good writing... i liked this :) |
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Re: Going unnoticed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:47:23 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net...
Good write..
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Re: Going unnoticed
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by dark_poetry2404 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:06:48 PM AEST
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wow. i really like that one. good job. keep writing.
~*~silent tears, silent cries, silent fears~*~
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