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Body,
Soul.
Giving you a euphoria of existence.

Her presence soothes you,
But she causes you pain.
You must have her,
You must!!!

She has captured your true being,
Giving you the essence of life.
An excuse to continue,
In your mundane, misconstrued mortality

You know she is evil incarnate,
But you love her.
She has destroyed you,
But, no she has saved you.

She is your heroine
She is heroin
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THE DRUG

Contributed by redwest802 on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:36:50 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



She gently caresses your mind,
Body,
Soul.
Giving you a euphoria of existence.

Her presence soothes you,
But she causes you pain.
You must have her,
You must!!!

She has captured your true being,
Giving you the essence of life.
An excuse to continue,
In your mundane, misconstrued mortality

You know she is evil incarnate,
But you love her.
She has destroyed you,
But, no she has saved you.

She is your heroine
She is heroin




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Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:59:27 PM AEST
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Great message and nice write.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:07:42 PM AEST
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wow... truely a great write! it shows the pains of different people...
it shows the impact that a single perosn can have on you
Great write
keep up the great work
*~Alicia~*


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:17:02 PM AEST
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This is the drug I struggled with for a while, and it eventually took the life of my best friend, so this one means alot to me. Thank you


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by SharonAngel on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:08:22 PM AEST
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so true is this write...how you captured the feelings of how a person on this drug much struggle is greatness...good work...keep it up.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:10:56 PM AEST
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wow, good...

good. i know i know, not descriptive, but it's true.
nice write, good message.

~waos


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:08:33 PM AEST
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This drug took the life of my brother at a young age and this describes perfectly how he felt about that drug. Because to have been clean for over 6 years and to go back to it it must have to him seem his hero his way out of the trouble he felt he was in.

There are also many other types of substances out there that will make you feel like this too and i also felt that in your poem.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:43:21 AM AEST
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wow... this is amazing


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:28:42 PM AEST
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A brilliant write on such a addictive drug
Inoc


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:12:31 AM AEST
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amazing, short and simple but full of truth. if drugs were beds this drugs would be a four poster water bed with massage feature. the nicest feelings have the costliest price. so well expressed, the shortness of this poem adds to the punch it packs.

well done x


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:24:41 PM AEST
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I just....wow. This perfectly describes the struggle one would go thru. Amazing.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyChow on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:45:00 PM AEST
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nice wording- it really describes it.
keep writing!!!
-hannah


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:20:36 PM AEST
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Great message
Blessing


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:43:45 PM AEST
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you captured the feeling so well....
im speechless...


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:51:03 AM AEST
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personally i have never done herion, but i am a drug addict in many different ways. this poem had two meanings. it can either talk about the battling of a drug addiction or on the other hand love. think about it, read this poem with a women in mind and not herion. so true, awsome awsome awsome write.
kate


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:48:02 PM AEST
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Perfection, Utter Perfection!
Dusty


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:33:58 AM AEST
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wow what an amazing way to capture the hold of drugs...well done


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by kerrah681 on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 12:43:28 PM AEST
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Wow, cool, i like alcohol and drug poetry, type in exactly that,"alcohol and drug poetry" in your yahoo search and scroll down to the alchol and drug poetry headliner, its a ntework54 site by sassy cajun, its got awesome related style poetry like the need for speed, lady heroine and sum other excellent ones.....But yeah I dug this one you wrote...cool


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:15:54 PM AEST
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Great poem about the struggle with addiction, nice work!


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Sae on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:59:57 PM AEST
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Good job!


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by sleepykisser on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:37:31 AM AEST
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very powerful


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by classicfailedhero on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 06:08:37 AM AEST
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hey pretty good but not my type, actualy it was pretty dull


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by ginnginn11 on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:31:41 PM AEST
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i love this poem it's got a really nice tone to it...


~Toots~


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:35:16 PM AEST
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Very powerful write, shows the draw that drugs have. Simply amazing. : )


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Marly on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:11:57 PM AEST
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I've struggled with this drug for 2 years, and i probably will forever. She's the only one who understands, she is my heroine


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by rapnificent on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:53:24 AM AEST
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Now that was tight!


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by The_View on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:35:35 PM AEST
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Love the double meaning.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 08:36:22 PM AEST
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This gives a reader an excellent view on what drugs mean to the user(Not that Im accusing you of being one!) Excellent job!


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by BurnedRose on Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 08:48:29 AM AEST
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wow! that was amazing!


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by franciswolf on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 05:53:25 PM AEST
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o.k.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 03:09:42 PM AEST
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powerful poetry


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by HERO on Tuesday, 17th March 2009 @ 05:05:22 PM AEST
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In my opinion, this isn't poetry...poetic...yes, very very poetic, but poetry? I'd disagree, poetry should rhyme, this is a passage. And remember folks, this is MY OPINION...no one need another YouTube....


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 07:52:03 PM AEST
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thank you for putting it into words.


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:38:39 AM AEST
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As I was reading this, before i got to the end I was thinking,
Hmm...this seems like a metaphor for heroin.
and it seems that it is.
The closest I've gotten to that
is a line of OC.

Good write



Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by simonwrite on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 10:35:05 AM AEST
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yeah man. ive struggled with addiction. its no joke, but there is some deep pools u can dive into from it when it comes to writing


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 06:16:42 AM AEST
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Wow! This is truly powerful writing.
Thankyou for sharing it x x x


Re: THE DRUG (User Rating: 1 )
by satanssecret1369 on Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 09:43:20 AM AEST
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Amazing.




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