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Array ( [sid] => 37472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sonnet #1 [time] => 2004-03-05 15:31:55 [hometext] => I hope you like this one. It's a bit of a step away from my usual dark poetry. [bodytext] => The sun beats its rays down upon me
As a brand new day is born
It feels just like a new beginning
A step away from the norm

The grass feels so soft under my feet
The breeze cools my face and I want more
As I go into a place to meet
The one woman whom I adore

Whenever my life is at its worst
She always makes me feel this way
Neither fire nor brimstone, nor forces of earth
Will ever take me from her, I pray

She is as gentle as a dove
She is my life, she is my love [comments] => 5 [counter] => 334 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MrWrite [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Sonnet #1

Contributed by MrWrite on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:31:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The sun beats its rays down upon me
As a brand new day is born
It feels just like a new beginning
A step away from the norm

The grass feels so soft under my feet
The breeze cools my face and I want more
As I go into a place to meet
The one woman whom I adore

Whenever my life is at its worst
She always makes me feel this way
Neither fire nor brimstone, nor forces of earth
Will ever take me from her, I pray

She is as gentle as a dove
She is my life, she is my love

Copyright © MrWrite ... [ 2004-03-05 15:31:55]
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Re: Sonnet #1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:50:04 PM AEST
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I knew that behind that dark disguise you were a softy. I like this better. Very good poem.

Re: Sonnet #1 (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 04:27:18 PM AEST
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well you got me smiling really big and enjoying the day with you as well.. wow.. so much feelings in a short poem.. i loved it and i know she will to... watch out she will attack you on this one with lots of kisses..... sandy

Re: Sonnet #1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:03:51 PM AEST
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This is very loving and I hope she brings a lot more love and happiness to your life.

Rita

Re: Sonnet #1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:35:03 PM AEST
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Life can be cruel and sometimes tough,
Just keep writing the happy stuff!

V.good.

wildejohnny.

Re: Sonnet #1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 07:20:58 PM AEST
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Great poem. You have a very clear and simple writing style. I am not into dark poetry but this is cool.

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