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Array ( [sid] => 37830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What do you see? [time] => 2004-03-08 14:20:10 [hometext] => I'd say this is life poetry... read it out of your own... whenever you feel life isn't worthwhile, this might cheer you up, i didn't write this for myself, just for those who have a hard time doing life out there :) [bodytext] => Look deeper into nothing, what do you see?
Can't you see the fine line between maturaty
and everything else they tell you to believe...
isn't it like a bright light shining out of darkness,
a light you follow, but there are no beginings?

A dark cloak is thrown over life,
to dim every single thread of good light...
You see only the bad and accept the worse,
but when last did you choose to see the light and end the verse...

Come to me, ask of me what you will,
in the end it's my choice, to choose... at my will

No forcing required, i'll give you what i want to give you, just don't ask stupid questions, cos in the end you have to live with it....

As snowflakes fall from the leafes of a tree,
something i've never seen, something i might never even see... but i've experienced damp cold air, the vibration of death so disturbing, almost to much for one person to bare

Now shine the light on me, so that i can breathe and live life once more again, clear me of all bad thoughts, make me live by myself again [comments] => 3 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 19 [informant] => kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
What do you see?

Contributed by kellros on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:20:10 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Look deeper into nothing, what do you see?
Can't you see the fine line between maturaty
and everything else they tell you to believe...
isn't it like a bright light shining out of darkness,
a light you follow, but there are no beginings?

A dark cloak is thrown over life,
to dim every single thread of good light...
You see only the bad and accept the worse,
but when last did you choose to see the light and end the verse...

Come to me, ask of me what you will,
in the end it's my choice, to choose... at my will

No forcing required, i'll give you what i want to give you, just don't ask stupid questions, cos in the end you have to live with it....

As snowflakes fall from the leafes of a tree,
something i've never seen, something i might never even see... but i've experienced damp cold air, the vibration of death so disturbing, almost to much for one person to bare

Now shine the light on me, so that i can breathe and live life once more again, clear me of all bad thoughts, make me live by myself again




Copyright © kellros ... [ 2004-03-08 14:20:10]
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Re: What do you see? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:45:38 PM AEST
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Nowadays it seems like the only people reading my poem is myself.. i'm not sure what is going on. I'd say allot of prejustice because i'm young, but one thing i surely can tell you... you are full of crap if you think you know and have experienced more than someone younger than you~believe it, because it is life, i'm not sure if it is even worth writing anymore, i know sometimes i post allot of crap, but then there are times that i actually post something worthwhile...
so guess if i don't get a read within 1 day i'm just going to beat it...


Re: What do you see? (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:01:29 PM AEST
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Hello, I'm here. This was a good write. Not only that, it has inspired me. I've wanted to write about maturing, but could never get a handle on how to approach it. I'm going to keep this one in mind as a springboard.
Thanks for sharing.
Stitch


Re: What do you see? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST
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This poem isn't about maturaty, it's about life and people treating you differently, and how to treat life, it's about beginings and ends, seeing the little good in everything bad and making decisions, not about growing up




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