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Array ( [sid] => 37849 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Roses sing [time] => 2004-03-08 18:02:19 [hometext] => for my love [bodytext] => The evergreens sway
As I go along my little way
The roses sing
As try to remember everything
Your smell wafts through the air
As the wind rushes through my hair
I am paralized by your sweet scent
My heart was meant
To love only you
Even thought our moments were fleeting and few
My mind whurls
As my body swirls
I am dancing in the rain
That is falling in a harsh downpour
It seems sometimes that my heart can no longer refrain
I want to tell you of my love that has been in store
And as the roses sing
And the rain will to me bring
Thoughts of you
I send my love across the sea
Of eternity
For eternity's moments are few
When compared to my love for you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LornyaNarFuinenya [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Roses sing

Contributed by LornyaNarFuinenya on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The evergreens sway
As I go along my little way
The roses sing
As try to remember everything
Your smell wafts through the air
As the wind rushes through my hair
I am paralized by your sweet scent
My heart was meant
To love only you
Even thought our moments were fleeting and few
My mind whurls
As my body swirls
I am dancing in the rain
That is falling in a harsh downpour
It seems sometimes that my heart can no longer refrain
I want to tell you of my love that has been in store
And as the roses sing
And the rain will to me bring
Thoughts of you
I send my love across the sea
Of eternity
For eternity's moments are few
When compared to my love for you

Copyright © LornyaNarFuinenya ... [ 2004-03-08 18:02:19]
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Re: The Roses sing (User Rating: 1 )
by LornyaNarFuinenya on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:07:19 PM AEST
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sweet scent sorry

Re: The Roses sing (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:13:29 PM AEST
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Awwww....... I can just close my eyes and feel myself in such a lovely scene... very sweet.....what a shame it don't work out huh!*sigh* I like the last two lines the best,
'For eternity's moments are few
When compared to my love for you'......
Sweeeeeeeeeeeetttt........

Re: The Roses sing (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:13:46 PM AEST
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Your mistake has been corrected on the poem, LornyaNarFuinenya.
By Mod_1

Re: The Roses sing (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:38:04 PM AEST
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'Tis both beautiful and sweet... I loved it!! Good write... keep it up!
~Donna~

Re: The Roses sing (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:09:05 PM AEST
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ohhh so lovely and sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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