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One Day In Time
Contributed by
Thejefmosis
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Friday, 13th September 2002 @ 11:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I saw her the first time,
She sauntered by,
Without a glance,
Not even a hi,
I gave her not a second glimpse,
And went on my way,
Of her I thought no more or no less,
Until the next day,
Not now but forthcoming faith is the test,
When I saw her face,
I saw her eyes of green,
And my heart began to race,
My obsession started to gleam,
Early in the morning sun,
I began to grasp my passion,
As the day began to run,
I started off the day with a new fashion,
For I took a swim in the clear waters,
The lake was calm not even a totter,
For this day would be a day of remembrance,
The time was brief before our depart,
But one last goodbye was of import,
I found that red haired girl,
The one with green eyes,
I showed her I cared,
In a strange whirl,
And then I left,
With my hearts cries,
When I got home,
With my friend I shared,
The ache of my heart,
But I still felt all alone,
And I have a part,
Of her that I still crave,
To this day,
By: Jeff A. Philpott
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Thejefmosis
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2002-09-13 11:32:00]
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Re: One Day In Time
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:59:40 AM AEST
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Very good , clearly shows the longing in your heart.
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Re: One Day In Time
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by NDean on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 11:40:03 AM AEST
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| Yes, it shows the characters (or your) feelings well. |
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