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[aid] => mick
[title] => Eternal Memories
[time] => 2004-03-10 06:28:33
[hometext] => A year on since my Grandma died. Rest in Peace. I'll always love you.
[bodytext] => A whole year gone by, and still I cry,
Those memories so fond and dear
A pain that's felt, memories blur and melt
Evolving into something unclear.
One year on, since that sun shone,
The heart felt pain so numb.
The way we'd talk on those long walks
The way we'd have much fun.
Embraced by grief, longing for relief,
Her love eternal made me whole.
Her gentle touch, she cared so much
She will always remain in soul.
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[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => dedicatedpoems
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Eternal Memories
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starlight_dancer
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:28:33 AM in AEST
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A whole year gone by, and still I cry,
Those memories so fond and dear
A pain that's felt, memories blur and melt
Evolving into something unclear.
One year on, since that sun shone,
The heart felt pain so numb.
The way we'd talk on those long walks
The way we'd have much fun.
Embraced by grief, longing for relief,
Her love eternal made me whole.
Her gentle touch, she cared so much
She will always remain in soul.
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starlight_dancer
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2004-03-10 06:28:33]
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:32:05 AM AEST
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Indeed, this is one outstanding tribute.
Your rhymes are scintillating (I think thats a good enough superlative) and it reads like a caress.
Beautiful. |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:33:23 AM AEST
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This is exsquisite and breathtaking...a beautiful tribute to your enduring love for your grandma. Very moving, written so well with so much heart. Something to be proud of; you should be proud of this, and I believe she is too, smiling on you as we speak.
Love you always,
-Dan |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:30:22 AM AEST
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| I lost my grandmother a year ago january 30th. She was my best friend. Your poetry is so beautiful. What a wonderful way to remember all you two had. After her death I was changed forever, Some loss is so terrible that it changes who we are forever. Wonderful tribute to your grandmother. (btw, I still cry too) |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:30:25 AM AEST
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| I lost my grandmother a year ago january 30th. She was my best friend. Your poetry is so beautiful. What a wonderful way to remember all you two had. After her death I was changed forever, Some loss is so terrible that it changes who we are forever. Wonderful tribute to your grandmother. (btw, I still cry too) |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:05:59 AM AEST
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A beautiful tribute. You were blessed to have each other.
Stitch |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by spacecowgirl53023 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:02:02 PM AEST
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| hey there, one of my grandmothers is schitzophrenic, and the other is near death, i understand how you may feel. i am glad i have not lost them both yet, but i feel for you. |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:39:13 PM AEST
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what a beautiful, loving sweet tribute to her, she will always live in your heart and soul, i know mine does..... big hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:21:19 PM AEST
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Excellent. She's watching over .
Whisper |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by venkat on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:53:37 AM AEST
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| Awww.. it is a great tribute.. venkat |
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:59:07 AM AEST
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Oh I'm so sorry for your Grandma"s loss.
Your poem was endearing and heartwrenchingly blue.
You must have been very close you two.
She will remain in your heart and soul,
forever is true........a love never leaves the heart if it is true.
Lovely, kind, and touching
lovingcritters
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Re: Eternal Memories
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:58:38 PM AEST
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| this is a great dedication... im sure she is looking down and smiling. starlight, you have a unique soul yourself... keep writing, i love these beautiful pictures you weave. |
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