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Shadows Linger Here
Contributed by
liquidchaos
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:12:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Surrounded by mumbles of conversation
Contained in this circle of trust
In isolated bonds of friendship
Shadows linger here.
Slowly moving closer towards us
Swallowing each disbeliever
Possessing minds of disregard
Shadows linger here.
Closing in upon each closed mind
Shaping new ideas of truth
Vitrified Chaos turns to ice
Shadows linger here.
Approaching darkness grips me tightly
Permeating every open pore
Rigid movementsnot my own
Shadows linger here.
These haunting acts are all around us
Shadows of hate and fear
Open your eyes to kill the anger
Take control of what is yours.
Shadows linger here.
Copyright ©
liquidchaos
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2004-03-10 22:12:44]
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Re: Shadows Linger Here
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by lapse on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:19:30 PM AEST
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| wow...."open your eyes to kill the anger. take control of what is yours".....awesome. brings a cool glint to my eyes and a determined hate for what should be hated. |
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Re: Shadows Linger Here
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by arden on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:39:12 PM AEST
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Awesomely done. I really liked this one.
Well done! Keep it up.
Arden
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Re: Shadows Linger Here
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by venkat on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:43:28 AM AEST
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| very impressive.. |
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