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Array ( [sid] => 38226 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wonderful Joys [time] => 2004-03-11 10:28:21 [hometext] => Just when you feel empty, take a look around. Just the little things in life can inspire you. [bodytext] => I would like to write something
That will make the comments soar
Really like to write a piece
Nobody could ignore

I walked into the bedroom
Where my son lay asleep
He looked so peaceful
A memory to surely keep

Suddenly he awoke
With daddy by his side
His face had a smile
And his eyes opened wide

He reached his hand out
As he stared into my eyes
He softly touched my cheek
Reaching from the bed where he lies

No words were spoken
All actions were enough for me
To sit by my sons side
And see how happy he can be

It is moments like this
That inspires me to write
Because my son wakes up happy
From going to bed without any fright

I know this world is not peaceful
But my son has not a clue
He has a long road ahead of him
Because he is only two

Thank you for reading my poem
That was inspired by my son
I hope you all enjoy it
As writing it was so much fun

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Waynster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Wonderful Joys

Contributed by Waynster on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:28:21 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I would like to write something
That will make the comments soar
Really like to write a piece
Nobody could ignore

I walked into the bedroom
Where my son lay asleep
He looked so peaceful
A memory to surely keep

Suddenly he awoke
With daddy by his side
His face had a smile
And his eyes opened wide

He reached his hand out
As he stared into my eyes
He softly touched my cheek
Reaching from the bed where he lies

No words were spoken
All actions were enough for me
To sit by my sons side
And see how happy he can be

It is moments like this
That inspires me to write
Because my son wakes up happy
From going to bed without any fright

I know this world is not peaceful
But my son has not a clue
He has a long road ahead of him
Because he is only two

Thank you for reading my poem
That was inspired by my son
I hope you all enjoy it
As writing it was so much fun

Copyright © Waynster ... [ 2004-03-11 10:28:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wonderful Joys (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:39:42 AM AEST
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What a remarkable poem. Love shows through every line. Thanks for sharing it with us. May love be with you all of your life from bernard.

Re: Wonderful Joys (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:43:52 AM AEST
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oh how sweet, they are so adorable at two, i loved watchin my kiddlings sleeping too, your poem is wonderful, hugs n' love, n' a special hug for your sweet lill inspiration:) nessa

Re: Wonderful Joys (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:54:48 AM AEST
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I saw a typo..(not being critical...hold on) the word starred...I think you might have meant stared? as in "Looked intently?....but as I thought about it...I thought of his little two year old eyes...starry because they don't yet know the harsh realities of life..and his wondeful daddy is there so he feels safe...it worked just right. Great poem!!!!!!! thanks, sometimes I need a reminder that there are still good things in life~

Re: Wonderful Joys (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:16:55 PM AEST
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Best inspiration ever, Wayne...Great poem..
Hugs to your son..
Jenni

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