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I've fallen in love with you.
I've given you the heart from my chest,
Something I've done for none of the rest.
You said you loved me,
But now THAT I cannot see
To be true,
So how can you
Lie to me this way?
When explaining your anger towards me you say
I lied to you, yet
You're the one being a hypocrite!
You told me not to write you notes anymore,
You ripped my heart apart and threw it to the floor.
How is it that though you're being a little *****,
This feeling of love comes back like the Seven-year Itch?
What can I do
To get rid of my love for you?
Why don't I just give up
And let you see what you're giving up? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Solmyr1404 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

What Can I Do?

Contributed by Solmyr1404 on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:56:55 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

What can I do?
I've fallen in love with you.
I've given you the heart from my chest,
Something I've done for none of the rest.
You said you loved me,
But now THAT I cannot see
To be true,
So how can you
Lie to me this way?
When explaining your anger towards me you say
I lied to you, yet
You're the one being a hypocrite!
You told me not to write you notes anymore,
You ripped my heart apart and threw it to the floor.
How is it that though you're being a little *****,
This feeling of love comes back like the Seven-year Itch?
What can I do
To get rid of my love for you?
Why don't I just give up
And let you see what you're giving up?

Copyright © Solmyr1404 ... [ 2004-03-11 15:56:55]
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Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:59:57 PM AEST
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ooo, drama... i'd suggest a few things, but i'll just take the write for what it is - masterpiece, an emo psycho masterpiece. lol... good write!@ ;0)
~Remy~

Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:21:37 PM AEST
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very nice write but yet very sad. I don't see how anyone who is in love can base there relationship on lies.sry that's just how I feel.... Love Angel

Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:51:49 PM AEST
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Some people are blind and throw away a good thing. I like this, it will get better

*J*

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