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Thunder Inside
Contributed by
Kittenfantastico
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:04:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thunder Inside
Hush child
Don't cry
It's not thunder
It's just the poor palpitations of my sick sad heart
I am not able to heal
Of let a doctor examine
I may only be in my early 40s
But my body feels geriatric
And sometimes generic
Too much too young
And now too late
To tolerate
Any procedures
However large or meager
It is what it is
A sick sad heart that is not interested in being repaired
I think the years grow short
The days drag so long.
When this pathetic beast
Hiding in it's cage of ribs
Grows too tired
It will just forever slumber
At peace at last
Copyright ©
Kittenfantastico
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2004-03-13 15:04:15]
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Re: Thunder Inside
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 09:47:09 PM AEST
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You've exspressed your self well here.
good job.
It's really sad tho but in our day and age there is so much to contend with.
Hang tuff.
Peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for reading my work and comenting.
I will the res of your work and look for more in the future. |
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Re: Thunder Inside
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:54:22 PM AEST
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| moving piece here, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Thunder Inside
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:21:29 PM AEST
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very moveing. nicely done. keep it up.
Arden |
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