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Array ( [sid] => 38534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hidden Love [time] => 2004-03-13 23:09:27 [hometext] => Thoughts that cross your mind just watching. [bodytext] => You have a boyish face except when your angered
A manly body , a heart as pure as Gold.
With a gentleness, a tender touch.
And still I wonder,
Your thoughts were always your own.
Though we have shared many Loves,
Family and Secrets and SPIT and THINGSI Still I've often wondered and can't help but think.
Maybe it could have all been different.

So counting the days and counting the years, of 40 Strong.
One day iii write we're still together

Dreaming I think back to when I was young,
When our hearts and thoughts were free
and you nor I were ever afraid,
We swore we'd stand together ,
We vowed our love together.
And even though he may not be the fellow I dream about .
We just still may belong together anyhow.

Our Love kept us together through all the Heart ache and Births and Deaths
The Bad with the Good
May everyone find out as as I did

That True Love is really Good.

Whisper [comments] => 1 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Hidden Love

Contributed by Whisper on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 11:09:27 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You have a boyish face except when your angered
A manly body , a heart as pure as Gold.
With a gentleness, a tender touch.
And still I wonder,
Your thoughts were always your own.
Though we have shared many Loves,
Family and Secrets and SPIT and THINGSI Still I've often wondered and can't help but think.
Maybe it could have all been different.

So counting the days and counting the years, of 40 Strong.
One day iii write we're still together

Dreaming I think back to when I was young,
When our hearts and thoughts were free
and you nor I were ever afraid,
We swore we'd stand together ,
We vowed our love together.
And even though he may not be the fellow I dream about .
We just still may belong together anyhow.

Our Love kept us together through all the Heart ache and Births and Deaths
The Bad with the Good
May everyone find out as as I did

That True Love is really Good.

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2004-03-13 23:09:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:40:49 AM AEST
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Yep that's just how we are finding it. Very well written.

You may like to draw a few comparisons with some of mine in similar vein( 50 yrs and still going)

bob

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