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Celestial Delight
Contributed by
darien
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:11:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The busy world before my eyes The skitter of the silent flies Into the gray to earn their pay Into the sea of responsability I watch it all with heavy heart And heavy soul, as each new start Brings new demand and compromise To thrust us closer to unknown skies And assures a limit to our universe But I like the way we found her first The depths and all the mystery All this wonder complaisantly A treasure trove of inspiration Corrupted by our exploration Bringing us closer to a definite end That age old truths are made to bend I take the moon in all its glory And count the many little stories She brought to men, better than me To set their imaginations free But after all the time we've spent And all the thoughts that men have lent I'd hate to cast an evil eye On they that sought to hypothisize So I sit and stare into the stars To find the one they claim is Mars And question how we came so fast To find the answers of the past And just what answer will be the last To destroy the celestial delight
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Re: Celestial Delight
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:52:12 AM AEST (User
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Good strong poem. It is as if you have recapitulated on life itself. Keep em coming from bernard |
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Re: Celestial Delight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:59:21 AM AEST (User
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Oh, I am with you on this. One of the greatest wonders to me is that God "set the stars in place." I truly believe that, and it continually leaves me awestruck. Romance is so much better than science.
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Re: Celestial Delight
(User Rating: 1 ) by CuttersAngel on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:00:35 AM AEST (User
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I love your rhyming!! I don't find very many people who can rhyme the way I can... it's nice to find someone else. |
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