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If I am not like you condemn me to hell
In the gas chambers you watch us asphyxiate
Your standards we will never live up to
You desire clones, thinking, acting even looking like you
If we do not it’s a world wide genocide

How many have been taken in by your propaganda?
How many more must you take
Enslaving, brain washing, forcing them to dig their own grave
Of ignorance and trepidation
Guards standing above them
Pushing them into the grave if they make one blunder

Who will rise above this brutal tyrant
Before the entire world is either killing or being killed
At what time will you see that you’re not helping us survive
That you’re turning the gas on in the chambers
Deceiving us
Making us believe it’s a shower to make us uncontaminated
When in reality it stripes us of our lives

You force those that are diverse into a camp
All the same all brainless all blind that is how you see them
Not worth the air they use up
You walk around with your nose in the air
I don’t know if you even see what you are doing
Or if you mean to kill all of us

You preach peace and love
But the only ones that deserve it are the ones like you
Blonde hair and blue eyes
Or religious and prefect
I am not one of you
I got liberated from the camp
I am free
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Shower Time

Contributed by lil_angel on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Your preaching is like that of Hitlers’ speeches from that magnificent pedestal
If I am not like you condemn me to hell
In the gas chambers you watch us asphyxiate
Your standards we will never live up to
You desire clones, thinking, acting even looking like you
If we do not it’s a world wide genocide

How many have been taken in by your propaganda?
How many more must you take
Enslaving, brain washing, forcing them to dig their own grave
Of ignorance and trepidation
Guards standing above them
Pushing them into the grave if they make one blunder

Who will rise above this brutal tyrant
Before the entire world is either killing or being killed
At what time will you see that you’re not helping us survive
That you’re turning the gas on in the chambers
Deceiving us
Making us believe it’s a shower to make us uncontaminated
When in reality it stripes us of our lives

You force those that are diverse into a camp
All the same all brainless all blind that is how you see them
Not worth the air they use up
You walk around with your nose in the air
I don’t know if you even see what you are doing
Or if you mean to kill all of us

You preach peace and love
But the only ones that deserve it are the ones like you
Blonde hair and blue eyes
Or religious and prefect
I am not one of you
I got liberated from the camp
I am free

Copyright Â© lil_angel ... [ 2004-03-15 00:31:36]
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Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:38:07 AM AEST
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Wow most powerful poem good job.

Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 1 )
by jbrow on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:50:43 AM AEST
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This one was very good, and very deep. we need more writers like you that take I good long look at the past. To make a better, and more brigtter tomorrow, I love all, of your work, so keep up the good work
P's
gene

Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:44:18 AM AEST
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That was a powerful, well-written write. The last verse wraps up the poem very nicely and is the most powerful to me. You rule :)

Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 1 )
by rhymeandreason on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:38:38 PM AEST
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Well done. Powerful, evocative of the dark side of power and where it takes us all when lie and deciet ascend to the seat of truth. Which can only happen when what is true has no voice willing to speak it.When liars and decievers walk into truths temple and no alarm is raised, we're all in for a sad sick ride to those places we would never want to go to.On target. Keep at it.

Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:49:04 AM AEST
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You've created a masterpeice here.
It's sad but then the hole thought of Hitler is sad. My late grandfather fleed to the United States and was spared.
Great job and I agree very powerfull.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 08:58:06 PM AEST
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CeCe...
This is a very potent and powerful poem... I like this. It's got a good message, and I'm glad that your liberated. It's like you tried to obtain that all your life. Your a much stronger person than I pretend to be. I'm sorry if I ever contributed to your oppression. Truly.

Jaime

Re: Shower Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:18:41 PM AEST
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Wow

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