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Array ( [sid] => 38688 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Crows Reveal [time] => 2004-03-15 01:14:12 [hometext] => Never trust a crow [bodytext] => Sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
Along came a crow and perched beside him
"Go away crow" the old man said
The crow said "Crow, your going to meet a old friend"
The crow flew away into the sky
The old man that day met a friend he had not seen in years
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
Along came a crow and perched beside him
The old man sat watching
Along came another crow and perched beside him
One crow told the old man that his dog was going to die and the other told him it was going to rain
The crow flew away into the sky
The old man had to run home that day because it started to rain
He saw his dog come running as he came home
The old man was glad to see his dog was okay
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day three crows came and perched beside him
One crow told him he was going to find a penny
One crow told he was going to find a dollar
The other crow told him he was going to mugged
On his way home a young man ran up to him and punched him and took his money
The old man want home feeling very battered
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day four crows came and perched beside him
One crow told him he was going to a place far away
One crow told him he was going to a place near by
One crow told him he was going to his home after supper
The crow said nothing
The old man want home after supper and was happy the last crow had not spoken
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day five crows came and perched beside him
One crow told him he was going to have a bad day
One crow told him was going to have a good day
One crow told him he was going to have another day
The two other crows did not say anything
The old man want home but on the way he found a penny
He got to his house only to see his little girl crying she told him the dog lay dying
He want in and saw the dog dying on the floor because it had been attacked by crows
The old man want mad screaming into the night towards the bench where one crow was perched
The old man want to grab the crow but the crow got away
As the crow was flying it called back staying "You have one more day"
The old man walked home sadly until he found a dollar and then he was better
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day six crows came and perched beside him
He tried to get a them but they were too fast
All the crows spoke at once
"You will be attacked by six crows and you will die"

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The Crows Reveal

Contributed by geoffreyalanbest on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:14:12 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
Along came a crow and perched beside him
"Go away crow" the old man said
The crow said "Crow, your going to meet a old friend"
The crow flew away into the sky
The old man that day met a friend he had not seen in years
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
Along came a crow and perched beside him
The old man sat watching
Along came another crow and perched beside him
One crow told the old man that his dog was going to die and the other told him it was going to rain
The crow flew away into the sky
The old man had to run home that day because it started to rain
He saw his dog come running as he came home
The old man was glad to see his dog was okay
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day three crows came and perched beside him
One crow told him he was going to find a penny
One crow told he was going to find a dollar
The other crow told him he was going to mugged
On his way home a young man ran up to him and punched him and took his money
The old man want home feeling very battered
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day four crows came and perched beside him
One crow told him he was going to a place far away
One crow told him he was going to a place near by
One crow told him he was going to his home after supper
The crow said nothing
The old man want home after supper and was happy the last crow had not spoken
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day five crows came and perched beside him
One crow told him he was going to have a bad day
One crow told him was going to have a good day
One crow told him he was going to have another day
The two other crows did not say anything
The old man want home but on the way he found a penny
He got to his house only to see his little girl crying she told him the dog lay dying
He want in and saw the dog dying on the floor because it had been attacked by crows
The old man want mad screaming into the night towards the bench where one crow was perched
The old man want to grab the crow but the crow got away
As the crow was flying it called back staying "You have one more day"
The old man walked home sadly until he found a dollar and then he was better
Again the next day sitting on a bench alone in the park, the old man sat thinking
This day six crows came and perched beside him
He tried to get a them but they were too fast
All the crows spoke at once
"You will be attacked by six crows and you will die"





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Re: The Crows Reveal (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:30:58 AM AEST
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Aha, now I'll never trust a crow. The man in the poem must be pretty confused, eh? This was funny, now I've got my first smile for the day.


Re: The Crows Reveal (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:10:50 AM AEST
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oh my!! interesting write
michelle


Re: The Crows Reveal (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:12:51 AM AEST
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Brother...you have no idea how right you are.

Well done.




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