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These muted marks of delusion, words pretence of death
Autumns courage fading through, each leaf embraces nature
In dormant trees lies winters reign, frozen by our failure
This seasons course but to demise, winters line repeated
A frosted heart in veins of glass, essence kept completed

Upon twilight the shadows call, enveloped within darkness
Each summoned word illusion lost, a solitudes regress
A silence plagues upon the winds, whispers taunt a breeze
In silver lace the rains embark, cascading like disease
Each droplet scars each leaf with life, revitalised ones youth
This elixir kept in twilights mouth, shadowing the truth

This creature lies, eternal loss, a tyrant of seclusion
A celestial stigma, buried within, sentiments confusion
Open scars of winters wraith, infected with torment
These dormant trees, consumed with hate, opening lament
When twilight breaks, sunrise draws, vanish will these fears
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Tyrant of Seclusion

Contributed by forever_lonely on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:16:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Once silent crows sit upon thee, calling out each breath
These muted marks of delusion, words pretence of death
Autumns courage fading through, each leaf embraces nature
In dormant trees lies winters reign, frozen by our failure
This seasons course but to demise, winters line repeated
A frosted heart in veins of glass, essence kept completed

Upon twilight the shadows call, enveloped within darkness
Each summoned word illusion lost, a solitudes regress
A silence plagues upon the winds, whispers taunt a breeze
In silver lace the rains embark, cascading like disease
Each droplet scars each leaf with life, revitalised ones youth
This elixir kept in twilights mouth, shadowing the truth

This creature lies, eternal loss, a tyrant of seclusion
A celestial stigma, buried within, sentiments confusion
Open scars of winters wraith, infected with torment
These dormant trees, consumed with hate, opening lament
When twilight breaks, sunrise draws, vanish will these fears
Encased in pride, lives persist, illusions were theses tears

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-03-15 22:16:38]
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Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:55:21 PM AEST
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breathing poetry, vividly skin crawling, im not going out in the woods tonight now, this poem is excellent! each poem you write you top yourself, ~i think if it thundered right now i would jump two feet lol, keep it up! hugs n' love nessa
p.s. more like this please:)

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Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:00:52 PM AEST
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This is amazing, one of the best I've read.
Please keep writing more.
~JadedExistence~

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:09:44 PM AEST
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all I can say is WOW. Mindbending poetry.
Bravo!!
Another work of art to add to your growing list.

Very well done
Larry

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:21:16 PM AEST
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I sit in awe as I read this a true beauty
michelle

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:43:23 PM AEST
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The words blend so smoothly, amazing write. So beautiful the descriptions you put forth. Really one of your best.

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:44:12 PM AEST
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The words blend so smoothly, amazing write. So beautiful the descriptions you put forth. Really one of your best.

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:44:12 PM AEST
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The words blend so smoothly, amazing write. So beautiful the descriptions you put forth. Really one of your best.

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:02:35 AM AEST
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so beautifully written this is amazing. wonderfully done i enjoyed it very much. great write by a great writer.
Arden

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 08:15:13 AM AEST
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An awesome, deeply, well thought out poem ... totally riveting in every respect... great write ... Jan

Re: Tyrant of Seclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:05:53 PM AEST
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I was profoundly impressed by this poem, Luke.

:This creature lies, eternal loss, a tyrant of seclusion
A celestial stigma, buried within, sentiments confusion :

It was a lesson in how to appreciate imagery.
Thanks for writing this. Truly.

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