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Array ( [sid] => 38827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bloodstain [time] => 2004-03-16 00:37:39 [hometext] => Not from personal experience but about people I know. Comments always aoppreciated. [bodytext] => He pushes you angrily
You stumble and fall
You hit the ground hard
In the middle of the hall

You know he's drunk
You can see it in his eyes
He promised he would stop
Just another of his lies

You taste blood in your mouth
When he slaps your face
The fear in your soul
You can't erase

Today is different
You won't come back
He's too far gone this time
And delivers smack after smack

You're begging and crying
But he can't hear you
To make the pain stop
It's the darkness you pursue

You finally reach it
As you tumble down the stairs
You know it's over
And say your prayers

It's finally done
There's no more pain
Your body lays still
On ground covered in a bloodstain [comments] => 6 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 13 [informant] => JadedExistence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bloodstain

Contributed by JadedExistence on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:37:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He pushes you angrily
You stumble and fall
You hit the ground hard
In the middle of the hall

You know he's drunk
You can see it in his eyes
He promised he would stop
Just another of his lies

You taste blood in your mouth
When he slaps your face
The fear in your soul
You can't erase

Today is different
You won't come back
He's too far gone this time
And delivers smack after smack

You're begging and crying
But he can't hear you
To make the pain stop
It's the darkness you pursue

You finally reach it
As you tumble down the stairs
You know it's over
And say your prayers

It's finally done
There's no more pain
Your body lays still
On ground covered in a bloodstain

Copyright © JadedExistence ... [ 2004-03-16 00:37:39]
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Re: Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:44:14 AM AEST
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Woo this is so sad but written well.
I know this sort of thing happens all the time and it's heart breaking.
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:36:25 AM AEST
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Ohh so sad
the end of this got to me
really bad....... I just had
a friend who killed her self
and was covered in her
bloodstain.....Very good write tho....
.......Love.......AnGel........

Re: Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:41:14 AM AEST
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Ow. That was a very sad write and made me angry as well to think that it's common in our society nowadays. Well done.

Re: Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by Pompous on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:04:26 AM AEST
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a problem that no-one should ever experience...well written

Re: Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:59:27 PM AEST
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this reminded me of a Nickleback song good to see that u to are against the abuse of women... good poem brought us into the fear that abused ppl feel.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:52:16 AM AEST
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OMG!!!!!!!! This is so sad. The Hell a woman has to go through. Such a disturbing read. *S* Cynthia

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