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The Moment Of Within Myself.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:38:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i lie crying, on my bed,
as the spirits call my name,
arms bleeding,
and i feel my deep pain!
i tremble at the thought,
of how i won't let it show,
but that's just a worry,
My head has just let go!
i close my eyes,
and feel the pressure,
i feel my levels rising,
i feel less bitter!
it's all real ife,
but it's still a game,
i feel extreme pleasure,
as it shoots through my veins!
so i linger, lifeless,
on my bed,
molded by my thoughts,
drowning in my head.
slow memories,
send vibrations through my brain,
i hold my-self tightly,
as up my wrist, spreads the flames!
i close my eyes,
feeling worthless,
there was to much blackness!
i've reached my toll,
but now i lie still...
i just stare away,
into darkened sene's,
floating away,
to face realities dreams...
my red sustance,
is dried on my arm,
then the tears come again,
as i become more calm.
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2004-03-16 14:38:02]
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Re: The Moment Of Within Myself.
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by jaavys on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:12:03 PM AEST
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I have a theory about recurrent thoughts. Some as you know may be self distructive. I think these thoughts are a short circuit in the brain. When we are able to pinpoint the short circuit with accuracy we will be able to go in and disrupt the circuit. A cure in the making.
you may try to write about others and make them happy. Don't write about yourself. Not only will your poetry get better but you will feel better about yourself. |
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