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Array ( [sid] => 3890 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Braindead [time] => 2002-09-16 10:32:49 [hometext] => A poem about writer's block. Please read. My head hurts cuz my ideas can't get out. [bodytext] => As luck would have it,
I’ve done it again.
I’m running away from my crimes.
Though no wrongs were done,
I’ve lost all my fun,
and am left sipping hemlock and brine.

As fate would see to it,
I’m stuck in between
the loss of my mind and my sight.
I pray for resolve,
or whatever it’s called,
and hope that it turns out all right.

As social laws dictate,
I’m starting to whine,
and my writing won’t get any neater.
I’m bored and I’m dumb.
That’s as clean as I’ll come.
Why must it all have this same meter?

My instinct makes certain
I sleep every night,
and amble around every day
while I rest assured
these cries won’t be heard,
and I’ve run out of new things to say. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Braindead

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 10:32:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

As luck would have it,
I’ve done it again.
I’m running away from my crimes.
Though no wrongs were done,
I’ve lost all my fun,
and am left sipping hemlock and brine.

As fate would see to it,
I’m stuck in between
the loss of my mind and my sight.
I pray for resolve,
or whatever it’s called,
and hope that it turns out all right.

As social laws dictate,
I’m starting to whine,
and my writing won’t get any neater.
I’m bored and I’m dumb.
That’s as clean as I’ll come.
Why must it all have this same meter?

My instinct makes certain
I sleep every night,
and amble around every day
while I rest assured
these cries won’t be heard,
and I’ve run out of new things to say.

Copyright Â© Butterat_Zool ... [ 2002-09-16 10:32:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Braindead (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 10:44:05 AM AEST
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I don't think you have writers block, sounded good to me, I gave it a 5

Re: Braindead (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 12:23:37 PM AEST
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If this a write stemmed from writer's block..you blow us all out of the water!! LOL

Daniela

Re: Braindead (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 12:27:43 PM AEST
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Didn't look so to me.:>)
Jenni

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