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Array ( [sid] => 39067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood Stained Iris [time] => 2004-03-17 17:23:03 [hometext] => comments? i like to hear what people think of my poems. THANKS! [bodytext] => the pain intensifies
and all goes black
i try to overlook the hurtful things
you've said
the blurrs of red
the enemy stays silent
the abhorrence of existence
rears its ugly head
erase my past
and these unspoken
years of hell
this dillusional vision
takes over my sight
my blood stains the iris
and my last petal has fallen
my heart has gone bitter.
sad it may be.
but stuck i must stay
in this haze,this fog.
my nightmare of life.
i cry my bloody tears.
to myself late at night.
garnet blood stained iris
has cursed my tomorrow
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 13 [informant] => crying-crimson-tears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Blood Stained Iris

Contributed by crying-crimson-tears on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

the pain intensifies
and all goes black
i try to overlook the hurtful things
you've said
the blurrs of red
the enemy stays silent
the abhorrence of existence
rears its ugly head
erase my past
and these unspoken
years of hell
this dillusional vision
takes over my sight
my blood stains the iris
and my last petal has fallen
my heart has gone bitter.
sad it may be.
but stuck i must stay
in this haze,this fog.
my nightmare of life.
i cry my bloody tears.
to myself late at night.
garnet blood stained iris
has cursed my tomorrow

Copyright © crying-crimson-tears ... [ 2004-03-17 17:23:03]
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Re: Blood Stained Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by Kittie on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:42:06 PM AEST
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very deep write "garnet blood stained iris
has cursed my tomorrow" I really understood that line been there done that and im sure I will go through it again as will you life is a test hold in there ^_- *Hugs*

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