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Array ( [sid] => 39101 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Change [time] => 2004-03-17 23:08:15 [hometext] => this is kindof about me. [bodytext] => Take me in your arms and hold me tight.
Never let me go, even if I put up a fight.
You are one person that can help me.
I hope you wont set me free.
With your help, maybe, I can get over it.
If not, to a hospital I will be sent.
Baby don’t take it personal, I don’t want to hurt you.
I’m trying to get better, It’s true.
It is so hard to quit something I love though.
Even if you hate it, I want the weight loss to show.
Just be there to support me while I am getting better.
Ana is an old friend, you have never met her.
It will be hard for me to let her go.
At times I may be offered food but will say no.
But try to convince me to eat so I don’t die.
If I don’t get better, my life will continue to be a lie.
I want to have a future with kids and a spouse,
Get a career, and own a house.
I need to get better, I need help from you.
You can change needs to wants, and my attitude will be new.

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Change

Contributed by perfection on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:08:15 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Take me in your arms and hold me tight.
Never let me go, even if I put up a fight.
You are one person that can help me.
I hope you wont set me free.
With your help, maybe, I can get over it.
If not, to a hospital I will be sent.
Baby don’t take it personal, I don’t want to hurt you.
I’m trying to get better, It’s true.
It is so hard to quit something I love though.
Even if you hate it, I want the weight loss to show.
Just be there to support me while I am getting better.
Ana is an old friend, you have never met her.
It will be hard for me to let her go.
At times I may be offered food but will say no.
But try to convince me to eat so I don’t die.
If I don’t get better, my life will continue to be a lie.
I want to have a future with kids and a spouse,
Get a career, and own a house.
I need to get better, I need help from you.
You can change needs to wants, and my attitude will be new.

March 4, 2004

Copyright © perfection ... [ 2004-03-17 23:08:15]
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Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:12:15 PM AEST
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good write...may you find the will to want to change and the strength to believe you can

Shari

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:41:45 AM AEST
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Wonderful write...
best wishes to you...
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:09:17 PM AEST
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What a poem! filled with determination but also gives you a sense of sadness. I hope you're get out of your problematic situation and find help and in the end obtain your goals. Best wishes, & keep writing amazing write !
Anne :D

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:25:14 AM AEST
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I hope you the best wishes. I want you to get better so you could have a better life and a normal one with someone special that needs you

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