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Array ( [sid] => 39112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You're never coming back [time] => 2004-03-17 23:59:54 [hometext] => gramma its been too long,4 years when u coming back???? [bodytext] => cry and crying myself to sleep
everynight,with the thoughts that fill my head
i think i'm in way to deep
i feel so dead

the day will come
when i'll meet you there
no one realizes how much
i miss you

i need you here,but you're there
you're never coming back
even though i need you here

before you left,you should have
been told all of my thoughts,
i really need you,i'll meet
you there,but i want you here

go no more,i'll meet you there
but you should know i need you here
i don't think you seemed to realize i care

i need you here,but you're there
you're never coming back
even though i need you here
(repeat 2x)

if you were here
you'd be so proud
but i know you are
you are on that cloud
watching over us [comments] => 6 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 48 [informant] => booboo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

You're never coming back

Contributed by booboo on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:59:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

cry and crying myself to sleep
everynight,with the thoughts that fill my head
i think i'm in way to deep
i feel so dead

the day will come
when i'll meet you there
no one realizes how much
i miss you

i need you here,but you're there
you're never coming back
even though i need you here

before you left,you should have
been told all of my thoughts,
i really need you,i'll meet
you there,but i want you here

go no more,i'll meet you there
but you should know i need you here
i don't think you seemed to realize i care

i need you here,but you're there
you're never coming back
even though i need you here
(repeat 2x)

if you were here
you'd be so proud
but i know you are
you are on that cloud
watching over us

Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-03-17 23:59:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You're never coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:29:47 AM AEST
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Aww this is sad, great write though!

Re: You're never coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:40:25 AM AEST
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LIKE A PRETTY SONG OF WHAT'S RIGHT & WRONG! A WELL FELT POEM WITH ALOT OF GREAT FEELINGS!!
DAN!!!

Re: You're never coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:49:41 AM AEST
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Awesome Write...But very sad.......
Good Job.......
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,

Re: You're never coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:35:20 AM AEST
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jolly good.
i like.

Re: You're never coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:11:17 AM AEST
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Touching, sad and very beautiful.

Re: You're never coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:01:58 AM AEST
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awww how sad .
good job on the poem.

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