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of the harbour town as we searched
for our destination.
The roads were dark and our one headlight
gave a suspensful glow
as our anticipation grew
with every corner that was taken.
We were chasing images of light
dancing in the sky like fireworks
on a Fourth of July night.
The soundtrack of our lives
played softly in the background as we conversed
about the change that was to arrive and
solidified a companionship
that had been built over the years.
We were chasing the Aurora Borealis
and although we may not have seen it
we found magic carried in on the wind
which echoed through our souls.
So maybe we did find the Northern Lights that night
because I can see it
every time I look into your eyes.
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Northern Lights

Contributed by AppleScruffs on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:47:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Our car guided us over narrow streets
of the harbour town as we searched
for our destination.
The roads were dark and our one headlight
gave a suspensful glow
as our anticipation grew
with every corner that was taken.
We were chasing images of light
dancing in the sky like fireworks
on a Fourth of July night.
The soundtrack of our lives
played softly in the background as we conversed
about the change that was to arrive and
solidified a companionship
that had been built over the years.
We were chasing the Aurora Borealis
and although we may not have seen it
we found magic carried in on the wind
which echoed through our souls.
So maybe we did find the Northern Lights that night
because I can see it
every time I look into your eyes.

Copyright © AppleScruffs ... [ 2004-03-18 03:47:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Northern Lights (User Rating: 1 )
by Graffitibox on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:24:25 AM AEST
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I like it a lot. Kinds sweet too.

Re: Northern Lights (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:02:28 AM AEST
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I don't even know what to say... this is a truly awesome write. I love the way you wrote it, and the end is perfect. I'll be keeping an eye out for more stuff from you. Great write!!

~ Moonlit

Re: Northern Lights (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:06:11 AM AEST
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"We were chasing the Aurora Borealis
and although we may not have seen it
we found magic carried in on the wind
which echoed through our souls."

Wow... just wow!
great writing....

off to vote as this deserves more than a 3

Re: Northern Lights (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:56:28 PM AEST
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This left me breathless. The imagery you painted in my mind was awesome. Post more! I look forward to your next one. Kie

Re: Northern Lights (User Rating: 1 )
by Maxximus on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:57:56 PM AEST
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very nice poem, personal and has a nice flow to it. Guess there's a little magic everywhere, in the skies, in that look. Keep up the good work.

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