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Array ( [sid] => 39146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks [time] => 2004-03-18 09:21:13 [hometext] => I got inspired by the evil Erzsébet Countess Bárthory Nadasdy, the one on which a lot of vampire are based. [bodytext] => to Vlad

In a dark corner
Of a room filled with heroes
You have buried it

In a dark corner
Of your merry mind
You have put it away

In a dark corner
On the bottom of your bottle
You have drowned it

What you have always known

You have grown up now
The moon whitens your sunkissed skin
And GI Joe does not protect you anymore

Your bright baritone swells to
A yearning soprano that will feed the organ pipes
In our Black Cathedral

Your forgotten promise is drained
From merciful oblivion
Sparkling, wonderful like dancing fireflies

When destiny is unleashed

Prepare
Throw off your childish cover
Of your long gone youth

Prepare
Tear away the transient veil
Of your ancient soul

Prepare
Wash away the liquor shelter
Of your hidden treasure

At last

Sweet beloved
Clad in the moonlight
We will dance
With the stars in our eyes

Sweet beloved
Clad in black
We will bond
In blood

Sweet beloved
Clad in the shadow of the past
We will be
That of the future

Erzsébet [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks

Contributed by Hurretje on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



to Vlad

In a dark corner
Of a room filled with heroes
You have buried it

In a dark corner
Of your merry mind
You have put it away

In a dark corner
On the bottom of your bottle
You have drowned it

What you have always known

You have grown up now
The moon whitens your sunkissed skin
And GI Joe does not protect you anymore

Your bright baritone swells to
A yearning soprano that will feed the organ pipes
In our Black Cathedral

Your forgotten promise is drained
From merciful oblivion
Sparkling, wonderful like dancing fireflies

When destiny is unleashed

Prepare
Throw off your childish cover
Of your long gone youth

Prepare
Tear away the transient veil
Of your ancient soul

Prepare
Wash away the liquor shelter
Of your hidden treasure

At last

Sweet beloved
Clad in the moonlight
We will dance
With the stars in our eyes

Sweet beloved
Clad in black
We will bond
In blood

Sweet beloved
Clad in the shadow of the past
We will be
That of the future

Erzsébet




Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-03-18 09:21:13]
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Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:09:15 AM AEST
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Wow..wonderful flow..very very beautiful,
your talent shines in it..very matured style.
venkat


Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:03:30 AM AEST
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Erzsébet Countess Bárthory Nadasdy- i wondered who she was thanks for informing me, this was a wonderful flowing dark write.

wildejohnny.


Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks (User Rating: 1 )
by Drive_By on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:23:01 AM AEST
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That's very very dark I'd say.
And sensual too. Great write.




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