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The Me Beyond The Mirror Within Myself
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:44:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is me inside.
Just turn it out and youll see her
Look into her and youll find me
My mortal soul in shape is she
She is strong and broken
She is so afraid
Her thoughts are swirled inside
Much like a tumor to her brain
She is beautiful
But no one sees
You look at her
Yet you find me
She is the me beyond the mirror
Shes all the things I long to be
And all the things Ive been
Our pain is shared
And magnified
Shes her
Im I
Were we
She loves too much
She gives her all
Shes empty
But shes pure
Were walking through the rain tonight
Were strolling hand in hand
The thoughts and dreams will live today
Arising with the dawn
She rarely speaks
I always coax
But forced by me she lies
Together suffering through time
Well never be apart
Of only that, were sure
Her beauty cannot shine past me
Yet we all know its there
Well sleep sometime to mask the pain
It worsens all our woes
It helps to shove the hurt away
To lock it up and eat the key
To keep it deep inside
In time it comes around and out
And that is when we cry
To be so close and love so much
It frees her thoughts to him
Whoever he is
Where hes at
Well love him for all time
And hell see her
And not just me
For once well be combined
Weve always been together
Yet shut behind closed doors
Hell open them and US hell see
Not one
But two
Set free
And finally when were there with him
Hell wipe away the tears
When were afraid
Hell hold us tighter
Closer to his heart
Forever well be safe for once
Ill get to set her free
Shell free me too
In summer rain
Relinquished and carefree
Well dance beneath a full blue moon
A harvest moon and stars
Reality swipes back the love
The laughter disappears
For in the present
Here and now
Were empty and alone
Were paralyzed with fright of this
We yearn for shorter years
Were reassured by all those things
But scared that theyll be gone
Terrified are we of death
Too soon
Too quick
Too close
So here well stay
Until time comes
Or if it never does
Well walk alone
Hand in hand
Blind and petrified
Well stay for all we know today
For everything weve seen
Well stay for everything that is
Well wait for what will be
And all that there ever was.
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liquidsunshine
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2004-03-18 16:44:40]
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Re: The Me Beyond The Mirror Within Myself
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:53:53 PM AEST
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I would love to see the sketch, another good one.
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Re: The Me Beyond The Mirror Within Myself
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:28:12 PM AEST
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Wow that is a very well written poem.
I love it. |
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Re: The Me Beyond The Mirror Within Myself
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:45:53 PM AEST
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Very deep emotion here. Makes for a very moving, beautiful poem. Excellent.
Keep your hope up.
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Re: The Me Beyond The Mirror Within Myself
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:56:43 AM AEST
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I loved this one! You expressed yourself beautifully here. I can tell that you're on the death watch in the 'Poetic Ilness'. Die everything else, and live ffor poetry.
Take care, my poet friend.
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Re: The Me Beyond The Mirror Within Myself
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:21:21 AM AEST
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Very touching, Chelsea. Amazing! Such internal conflict, yet such peace due to love. Amazing is love's healing power. Beautifully done. Never cease to hope!
~Carrie~ |
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