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Array ( [sid] => 39304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gothic truth. [time] => 2004-03-19 08:39:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A lovely pink rose, sitting
On this hill
Oh how it gives me
The chills
Looking at the beautiful picture
That makes the world,
Thinking of what it hides
All the evil on the inside
Kids shooting each other
Leaving a trail of blood
Miles long
Children being raped
Women being beat
Men being killed
How can we live
In a happy place
So sorry If we wont
slip in to the slumber that
covers the world
more and more of us
are waking to tell
the truth, YES
good things happen
but the evil has been eternal
its time for a change

Were looked down on
Because we see the
TRUTH
Why wont you SEE!
OPEN YOUR EYES
SHUT YOUR MOUTH
SIT THE DOWN
AND LISION TO ME
I’M THROUGH WITH
ALL THE BULL
WHAT YOU SEE IS
WRONG, ITS
POISEN COVERED
CANDY
PEOPLE LIE, THEY STEAL,
THEY KILL!
AND YET YOU GO THROUGH
LIFE THINKING
“all is good and happy”
YOUR WRONG
YOUR LIFES PEACHY, OH!!!
GOOD FOR YOU!!!
YOU KNOW WHAT
YOU!!!
YOUR HIDING BEHIND A FALSE
SMILE, YOU KNOW EVERYTHING IS NOT
RIGHT
But that’s the difference between
Me and the world
I don’t let it get
Me down
Am I sad
All day, and all night?
No, I know life
Is not forever
But what is???
Its time to wake up
I’m the alarm clock
WAKE THE UP!!!
Your candy coated life
Is over
Time to learn the
Truth, the worlds
Evil,
Its time
We changed that
Put down the guns
Stop the beatings
No more rapes
BUT HEY
THAT’S JUST
A WISH OF A
UP GUY TO THIS
UP WORLD
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 6 [informant] => ChaosBound [notes] => ....edited by mod_6 for unsuitable content....19-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Gothic truth.

Contributed by ChaosBound on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:39:22 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



A lovely pink rose, sitting
On this hill
Oh how it gives me
The chills
Looking at the beautiful picture
That makes the world,
Thinking of what it hides
All the evil on the inside
Kids shooting each other
Leaving a trail of blood
Miles long
Children being raped
Women being beat
Men being killed
How can we live
In a happy place
So sorry If we wont
slip in to the slumber that
covers the world
more and more of us
are waking to tell
the truth, YES
good things happen
but the evil has been eternal
its time for a change

Were looked down on
Because we see the
TRUTH
Why wont you SEE!
OPEN YOUR EYES
SHUT YOUR MOUTH
SIT THE DOWN
AND LISION TO ME
I’M THROUGH WITH
ALL THE BULL
WHAT YOU SEE IS
WRONG, ITS
POISEN COVERED
CANDY
PEOPLE LIE, THEY STEAL,
THEY KILL!
AND YET YOU GO THROUGH
LIFE THINKING
“all is good and happy”
YOUR WRONG
YOUR LIFES PEACHY, OH!!!
GOOD FOR YOU!!!
YOU KNOW WHAT
YOU!!!
YOUR HIDING BEHIND A FALSE
SMILE, YOU KNOW EVERYTHING IS NOT
RIGHT
But that’s the difference between
Me and the world
I don’t let it get
Me down
Am I sad
All day, and all night?
No, I know life
Is not forever
But what is???
Its time to wake up
I’m the alarm clock
WAKE THE UP!!!
Your candy coated life
Is over
Time to learn the
Truth, the worlds
Evil,
Its time
We changed that
Put down the guns
Stop the beatings
No more rapes
BUT HEY
THAT’S JUST
A WISH OF A
UP GUY TO THIS
UP WORLD




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Re: Gothic truth. (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:09:59 PM AEST
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Hmmm stronge poem you wrote.
I like it straight to the point no bull####.
good job.


Re: Gothic truth. (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:54:06 PM AEST
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wow! really good, and when people do wake up and see, maybe the world will be a better place, but until that day, i guess those of us with a thought of truth are just on our own. keep writing, you have style!




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