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Array ( [sid] => 39405 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Truth or The Lie? [time] => 2004-03-19 22:39:51 [hometext] => This isn't an intirely true poem, i just greatly elaborated on a real conversation and things that have been goin on with my ex and i....please tell me what you think... [bodytext] =>

He told me he still wants me
He says he’s sorry now
He tells me still loves me,
And he wants to rebuild our vow

He told them all he doesn’t care,
That it was all a load of sh**.
Like a shirt he doesn’t want to wear,
Or a shoe that just won’t fit


He said he really tried
To hide his feelings away
But his true feelings he couldn’t hide
And now he’s here to stay.

No, he tells you lies again.
When will you ever learn?
He won’t like you ever again,
Until his other options burn.


He really cares now, see?
How much how hard, he tries
The things he said to me,
Were never really lies.

He never cared about you
Just another of his toys
Thrown out by his disgust
For better, prettier joys


He says such, kind sweet words,
How could I not comply?
He says that he has never known
A girl as great as I

It’s just more crap he says
When has he ever backed it up?
It’s not like he really cares
He just wants another hookup


Why shouldn’t I believe him,
When he says things I want to hear?
He says he won’t hurt me,
No pain should I ever fear.

He’s going to do it to you again,
Why’s it hard so hard for you to see?
All he’s trying to do is get some from you,
Why’s that so hard for you to believe?


I need to believe what he tells me,
What else can I do?
There’s no one better here beside me,
So it’s him that I will choose.

You’re being so stupid girl,
Move on and don’t look back.
He’s only trying to deceive you girl,
He's forcing you to crack.



[comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 24 [informant] => kayald [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
The Truth or The Lie?

Contributed by kayald on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered





He told me he still wants me
He says he’s sorry now
He tells me still loves me,
And he wants to rebuild our vow

He told them all he doesn’t care,
That it was all a load of sh**.
Like a shirt he doesn’t want to wear,
Or a shoe that just won’t fit


He said he really tried
To hide his feelings away
But his true feelings he couldn’t hide
And now he’s here to stay.

No, he tells you lies again.
When will you ever learn?
He won’t like you ever again,
Until his other options burn.


He really cares now, see?
How much how hard, he tries
The things he said to me,
Were never really lies.

He never cared about you
Just another of his toys
Thrown out by his disgust
For better, prettier joys


He says such, kind sweet words,
How could I not comply?
He says that he has never known
A girl as great as I

It’s just more crap he says
When has he ever backed it up?
It’s not like he really cares
He just wants another hookup


Why shouldn’t I believe him,
When he says things I want to hear?
He says he won’t hurt me,
No pain should I ever fear.

He’s going to do it to you again,
Why’s it hard so hard for you to see?
All he’s trying to do is get some from you,
Why’s that so hard for you to believe?


I need to believe what he tells me,
What else can I do?
There’s no one better here beside me,
So it’s him that I will choose.

You’re being so stupid girl,
Move on and don’t look back.
He’s only trying to deceive you girl,
He's forcing you to crack.







Copyright © kayald ... [ 2004-03-19 22:39:51]
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Re: The Truth or The Lie? (User Rating: 1 )
by perfection on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:05:25 PM AEST
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Its really good hun!! Who is this one about?
xoxo
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