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[aid] => mick
[title] => Pieces Of The Other Woman
[time] => 2004-03-21 01:33:07
[hometext] => Watch out or she'll fool you as well,without your knowledge she'll cast her spell
[bodytext] => Scarlet blush and strawberry gloss
Stiletto heels and peppermint floss
Flaxen locks, a temptress gaze
Crimson lips,a face ablaze,
Are pieces of the other woman.
Golden skin on white sheer dress
The touch of wealth her fingers press
A heart commited to her own behalf
Euphoric smiles through joyous laughs,
Are pieces of the other woman.
A helpless child,a starving mother
Her baby blues sparkle as they suffer
A shattered dream,unstable future
Her curves rejoice the life obscure
Are pieces of the other woman.
Hatred spinning out of control
Fragments restored inside her soul
Vindictive heart, malicious needs
Wrath sprouting through her hatred seeds,
Are pieces of the other woman.
I've warned you once,I've warned you twice
The vixen will make you pay the price
You still succumbed to your salicious desires
And now condemned you'll be in her infernal fires
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 391
[topic] => 43
[informant] => pumpkinpie
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 85
[ratings] => 18
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
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Pieces Of The Other Woman
Contributed by
pumpkinpie
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:33:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Scarlet blush and strawberry gloss
Stiletto heels and peppermint floss
Flaxen locks, a temptress gaze
Crimson lips,a face ablaze,
Are pieces of the other woman.
Golden skin on white sheer dress
The touch of wealth her fingers press
A heart commited to her own behalf
Euphoric smiles through joyous laughs,
Are pieces of the other woman.
A helpless child,a starving mother
Her baby blues sparkle as they suffer
A shattered dream,unstable future
Her curves rejoice the life obscure
Are pieces of the other woman.
Hatred spinning out of control
Fragments restored inside her soul
Vindictive heart, malicious needs
Wrath sprouting through her hatred seeds,
Are pieces of the other woman.
I've warned you once,I've warned you twice
The vixen will make you pay the price
You still succumbed to your salicious desires
And now condemned you'll be in her infernal fires
Copyright ©
pumpkinpie
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2004-03-21 01:33:07]
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:19:53 AM AEST
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Wow....you came back to us with a vengence didnt you? This is so powerful and so very well written it leaves me gasping. Very well done
Roses
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:55:19 AM AEST
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| Awesome write pumpkin ... your talent shines in this .... Jan |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:57:55 AM AEST
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Wow what a poem! My my very well expressed! What a sad ending well its all bitter. Great write!!
Anne :D |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by twinkletoes on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:47:25 PM AEST
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thought provoking......i like the style of this poem. very interesting ending, with good imagery and subject matter throughout woven with a touch of sadness. i should be bold and say very good insight, but I won't. I'll say good perseption of humanity instead.
tt |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 01:17:43 AM AEST
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Wow..great..its a talented and powerful write..
venkat |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:50:19 PM AEST
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Awesome Write
Loved It....Although My Comment
Might Not Mean Nothing To Ya
After That First Comment I
Left Ya On That One Poem..
.I Totally Didn't
Mean It The Way I Wrote It..
And I Really Do Apologize...
I Understood The Poem
Very Well...It Was Really A Great Write
But I Think We Both MisUnderStood Each Other...Hope You'll Find It
In Your Heart To Forgive Me...
,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:45:45 PM AEST
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| excellent, this line says so much too, "A heart commited to her own behalf".. so well written, do keep penning with your flowing poetry:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:19:06 PM AEST
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Thanks Angel for your comment on this poem,as for the other comment you're apologizing for I think you're mixing me up with someone!:)
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:34:08 PM AEST
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Ok, let me catch my breath. Awesome stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:24:23 PM AEST
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You say out loud, "I told you so" but to yourself you say, "I care".
Nice write... |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by emystar on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 10:27:39 PM AEST
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Sad but unfortunatly true in lotsa cases when money is involved.
Great writing. U have your own unique way of writing which is good.
huggsm smiles,
emy |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Overstated on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:49:43 PM AEST
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Nice ending!!! I love the intelligent rhyming couplet to finish the poem off.
Wow what a powerful piece you end up hating the other women yet the poem gives us some indication of the other women’s motivations and why she is the way she is. I thought this poem was really really good you really got on a roll with this one it felt like the poem came together in the palm of your hands. If that makes sense!
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:59:00 PM AEST
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Powerful poem.
Spazzo |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Taurusgem1 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:03:28 AM AEST
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I loved this peice, After your comments on mine I was compelled to read some of your work I have to say you have a delicate brillance to your writting. Keep it up
Page |
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Re: Pieces Of The Other Woman
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:31:36 PM AEST
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| wow, powerful with a wonderful imaginative flare & style. Five stars? Not enough. |
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