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Imitation
Contributed by
mary0005
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:02:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As I walk down the street,
Mid New York, all the heat
Slams into my face
Along with half the human race.
I try to avoid.
Maybe Im just paranoid,
But it seems that the world
Follows like a herd.
You always do
Just whats expected from you.
You never surprise,
You see the world through everyone elses eyes.
We all fit neatly into
Folds of others. I am you
And your are me
Just with different bodies, cant you see?
We resemble those jigsaws
Creating unwritten laws.
I think that people need to get a clue
For sadly so, it seems it is true
That when people are free to do as they please
They usually imitate each other, like particles in the breeze.
Copyright ©
mary0005
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2004-03-22 00:02:35]
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Re: Imitation
(User Rating: 1 )
by bluecoconut on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 05:25:51 PM AEST
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Wow. Thats REALLY good! You should check out another poetry site. Its called allpoetry.com. There is alot of cool stuff there. Any ways, good job!!!
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